Bedroom Set

[qwertyman9003]

It took about 4 days. I've been sick so i've been able to work on it more.
rate outta 10
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/1126/bedandstandst7.png (http://imageshack.us)

[RedFlagWaving]

thats aweome except for some pixel errors:

-The sides of the bed are shaded weird
-The lamp is a weird shape
-The big drawer : the little pull-out thingys (dont know the word) dont have black lines at the top of them, also its a bit empty,try adding something on top. The bottom right leg looks a bit out of place. fix that.
-The triangle stand thing holding the monitor up arent proprtioned right. Also add an actual computer attached to the monitor. nobody uses just a monitor to use computers. :rolleyes:
-One of the lines on the last drawer is not right. Fix it. Same thing with the leg on the big one.
-Your black lines are way too fuzzy. dont try to make them look smooth or it looks weird. just make straight black lines.

well, hope that helped. bye!

[qwertyman9003]

its not a computer moniter its a lcd tv

[simon305]

lmao triple post

looks ok but when you look into it it looks like a load of badly formed pixels so im going to have to say i dont realy like it

[BobX]

liking the lamp thing

i dont like the drawrer things how they look thers no handles and it looks like a scrubs house thats ben boarded up - the windows

so i dont like those
i like the lamp though

needs improving before it gets my sweet, swet rep : P

5/10

[Untouchable]

Some of the lines aren't stright e.g. on the monitor drawer, middle corner of the bed.

The lamp is a funny shape and with the legs of the monitor like that t would fall backwards.