Bookshelf by XBladerX

[RedFlagWaving]

heres a bookshelf i made i based it on this: http://www.ikea.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/ProductDisplay?topcategoryId=15561&catalogId=10103&storeId=3&langId=-15&parentCats=15561*15639&productId=42154&chosenPartNumber=40068154
WIP1:
http://i15.tinypic.com/2rbyqea.png
WIP2:
http://i15.tinypic.com/3zjfaxt.png
Finished product:
http://i9.tinypic.com/2m7yger.png
plz rate and C&C plz

[siz]

0/10 for wip 1
8.5/10 for wip 2
0/10 for finished version because

YOU FORGOT THOSE DAMN VBLACK LINES AGAINNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!

sorry but you just wind me up with that and my alarm just goes off

[qwertyman9003]

I like the second one better. The finished one dosent look habbo like.

8/10 w.i.p. 2
6/10 finished version because you should add black lines to make it more habbo like

[infatuation]

imo, last one is best.
it actually looks like a normal dresser; without the black lines.
i mean, do real bookshelfs have black lines? not really.

[siz]

imo, last one is best.
it actually looks like a normal dresser; without the black lines.
i mean, do real bookshelfs have black lines? not really.


get ontopic... its not about real dressers its about what goes with habbo

[Crimson]

imo, last one is best.
it actually looks like a normal dresser; without the black lines.
i mean, do real bookshelfs have black lines? not really.

I will state arguments through your sentances;

1) No it is not.
2) Habbo is not "normal" it is a virtual game that uses thick cartoon like outlines
3) No, they do not. But do real people have funny bodys, one inch long legs like habbo states?
4) I cant argue with that, although what you are saying is easily argumentative, you are correct.

:8

[Ekalb]

0/10 for wip 1
8.5/10 for wip 2
0/10 for finished version because

YOU FORGOT THOSE DAMN VBLACK LINES AGAINNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!

sorry but you just wind me up with that and my alarm just goes off

If your a "Graphic designer" you should know that things don't need black lines as long as they have a dark colour outline.
You can look at loads of good pixel art and see that most don't have black lines.

[micky.blue.eyes]

Hmm, not bad, be the last version doesn't look habbo like, and I'm wondering, does it even fit in a habbo room?
I think there's something wrong with the shades aswell, but I don't care, my shades aren't perfect either. :)

8/10

[Radii]

It's good, but as said before I like the WIP 2 better than the finished one... it just doesn't look quite right.

And as for the actual Ikea bookcase... it's very boring and I certainly wouldn't pay that much to buy it ^_^

[Crimson]

If your a "Graphic designer" you should know that things don't need black lines as long as they have a dark colour outline.
You can look at loads of good pixel art and see that most don't have black lines.

You should realise it is habbo art that uses black outlines.

However,
if it was pixel art, where it would be possible to not use black outlines, then it would not be in the section. :)

[RedFlagWaving]

off topic -.-
and i guess i shouldve posted it in non habbo related alts...
its not supposed to be habbo-y!!!
and shutup about the black lines it looks way better with no black lines...

[PigsNose]

I like it.
Especially the finished one.
Just because it doesn't have black lines around, does it matter.
Good effort
8/10

[Ekalb]

You should realise it is habbo art that uses black outlines.

However,
if it was pixel art, where it would be possible to not use black outlines, then it would not be in the section. :)

Perhaps Blader decided to improve on habbo which is cool.
Some parts of habbo would like possibly better if they tried erasing black lines. But still I don't think it's anything to complain about. It does have outlines they just aren't black.

[RedFlagWaving]

maybe i should post in non habbo related next time :\

[GommeInc]

get ontopic... its not about real dressers its about what goes with habbo
Stop whining, your work is hardly any good :rolleyes:

This is amazing in my opinion, take it from someone who actually appreciates Pixel Art ;) The second one is great if you want it Habbo like and the last one is also great if you are looking at Pixel Art.

I can't rate W.I.P 1 because it is the beginning of the work, but I'll rate W.I.P 2 8/10 and W.I.P 3 9/10.

Excellent work, ignore siz ;)

[RedFlagWaving]

k thx ;)

[Danny,]

Wip 2 Is the best if you were going for a habbo shelf, but if you intended on it looking realistic then the final result is really good
8/10

[RedFlagWaving]

anybody find any pixel errors?

[Dazzle]

That looks really good, I like the finished one but my gosh it's tall lol. I think it looks good without the black lines, Keep up the good work. Why not try putting books in it? :)

[RedFlagWaving]

ya i might try later, cant be bothered to right now :\