View Full Version : [Alteration] Shelf.
Black_Parade
11-11-2006, 11:52 AM
Didnt take very long.
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/8660/bookshelfpw5.png (http://imageshack.us)
C&c /10 Please.
Dazzle
11-11-2006, 12:06 PM
It looks ok is one or two pixel errors but overall looks ok 5/10
Black_Parade
11-11-2006, 12:15 PM
Thank you can you point out the errors?
Papershop
11-11-2006, 12:19 PM
There you go.
http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/2690/apixelerrorcn0.png
Dazzle
11-11-2006, 12:26 PM
heres just a bit of the wrong bits, it needs a thickness and as 1:01am said the corner bit thing plus this
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v328/nylton100/pixelerrors.jpg
Papershop
11-11-2006, 12:32 PM
Yeh. Looks like it wouldnt hold much otherwise it wud collapse. Add an extra black line round the inside to make it thicker. Then it will look better. + Improve the pixel errors.
Black_Parade
11-11-2006, 12:32 PM
Thanks, But the ones on the shelf had to be there because If they werent it would look Strange.
Black_Parade
11-11-2006, 12:38 PM
Uptated Version :
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/6190/v2shelfry5.png (http://imageshack.us)
Ive added a highlight and fixed the errors.
Edit:
Sorry For Double post. Please Dont Give Me ANOTHER Infraction :p
micky.blue.eyes
11-11-2006, 12:44 PM
Thanks, But the ones on the shelf had to be there because If they werent it would look Strange.
That's because you made a mistake, I fixed one shelf for you, now you have to fix the others.
Papershop
11-11-2006, 12:44 PM
looked better before :D
What are the light brown edges for?
Change em back to black
micky.blue.eyes
11-11-2006, 12:47 PM
looked better before :D
What are the light brown edges for?
Change em back to black
Those light brown edges are needed (most of the time), but I think he made them too light.
Papershop
11-11-2006, 12:54 PM
Heres my updated version. Enjoy!
http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/8864/remakemr8.png
DJ-Ali
11-11-2006, 12:57 PM
Maybe you could do a shadow under them. That'd look good. Anyway 7/10.
Black_Parade
11-11-2006, 01:13 PM
Thanks, and your version hasnt got the shading it needs on the front part :p
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