LOOK AT PLEASE

[dbgtz]

Ok right couldnt get on here too big i tink so go on...
www.pictureforhabbox.piczo.com/
soz bout using piczo but it old and has nothing bout me
its the only pic there so could ya see and rate and moan and just say summit bout it
PLEASE RATE OUT OF 10 THOUGH!!

[PigsNose]

I don't like it. I circled things I don't like and why.
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d146/---Kirstie---/Office.jpg

1. The dots on the floor are just random dots scattered about. No real meaning for them. And the flooring is default, try and use different variety of colours.
2. I don't exactly know what this is. I think it is a filing cabinet, but if so, why is it there because the habbo will not be able to get to it and it is poorly done with not much shading.
3. When do you find desks in that colour? It is too bright, and if you are trying to do a wooden effect, try a darker brown. This is also a default colour, range in colours please.
4. The lines are randomly done and are scattered about. Don't be so clumsy about it and don't use pure white and black for the blinds, it doesn't look right. Use pure black for outlines only.
Also I forgot to mention, no shading or shadows. The pot of the yukka tree at the bottom, there is a bit of black line missing. Neither the yukka, desk, cabinet, chair or anything else has a shadow.
Please take care in your work, and look EXTREMELY closely to make sure you have NO mistakes.
3/10 sorry :(

[dbgtz]

lol ill try update now
i only done in like 30 mins i was bored lol

[Minix]

I like what you've tried to do - I love the theme! Fix all the errors and use better colours and it'll be fantastic! I understand what kind of idea you had, and how you wanted to do it - and although it didn;t wuite turn out perfect, it still desevres rep for the idea ;)

[dbgtz]

UPDATED!!!! ALERT:UPDATED LOOK AT IT AGAIN

[Sir-Cameron]

it looks worse...

[dbgtz]

seriously?

[PigsNose]

Yup
You didnt change anything except a few dark brown lines
Can you please change ALL the colours.
They are just default.

[dbgtz]

ok modified AGAIN look closed btw coz i did add ova things last time.
The only thing i KNOW i need to do is the light

[PigsNose]

Looks even worse, and you put, what I think is a light in.
My God!
Anyway, change the colours, they are default!

[dbgtz]

they aint all defualt!!!
make ur mind up btw u say change this and i DID
plus i wanna use some defualt

[Sentrax]

I think PigsNose is being too harsh on you.
Obviously you're not pro, and you're trying your best.
And I think that it's really good.
:)
Just pay attention to detail and take your time.
Also, the shadows go different ways, some go left, and some go right. Maybe fix that? Anyway, keep posting!

[leefarrow]

What program do you use to do this because i am wanting to do it ? :D

[hit-by-a-car]

10/10 its good! I dont care what the others think, this alts a real winner!