MY HOTEL VIEW! [LOOK][WIP]

[Mario]

well its not really a hotel view its more of a town view..
/10 C+C its still Wip
http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/9333/hotelviewzo2.png (http://imageshack.us)

[Sentrax]

Oooo I really like it so far.
I look forward to the finished version. :)
Alsom try and animate the car so it moves across the road. :)

[Sir-Cameron]

the building looks like its big enough to go onto the road... Try moving it a bit closer...

[Attached]

Dude that is wicked

[Zuar]

Nice,
can't wait to see your finished version !

[Mario]

heres the new improved version -
http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/5331/hotelviewbv8.png (http://imageshack.us)
/10 c+c ignore circle and stuff please =]

[Browney]

Looks good. I dont really rate WIPS, but good so far.

[Mario]

Added background - 70% complete now
http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/7342/hotelviewll5.png (http://imageshack.us)
adding more as i type

[scubadiva]

That's excellent

What about some small houses?

[CokeZero]

Oooo I really like it so far.
I look forward to the finished version. :)
Alsom try and animate the car so it moves across the road. :)
yeah just need to animate by going on flash then it gr8

[Mario]

uuuppppddddaaattttteeee
added new building added new trees to the park updated other things <3
http://img392.imageshack.us/img392/9968/hotelviewcg0.png (http://imageshack.us)

[solidsnake9999]

very nice i would give you rep but i cant because im in red.

[brodeo]

The orange building extends too far out the back.

[PaintYourTarget]

Yeah, I agree with Cheep. The roof looks dodgy, the side walls should come down alot further.
Also, you've used highlights but not on the hedges, why?!

[Mario]

new update
95% complete now Added; made the shadows darker added shadows to hedges and fixed a few pixel errors and pulled the building back
http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/3470/hotelviewxm4.png (http://imageshack.us)
/10 C+C

[Attached]

Dude it looks awesome again, keep it up, and check my private message plaese :P

[PaintYourTarget]

The building is still not quite right. Mind if I fix it up for you?

[Mario]

Go ahead less work for me =]

[Hopeless]

its looks good. But where exactly is the "hotel" in hotel view
and the orange building doesn't look right
7/10

[Mario]

its looks good. But where exactly is the "hotel" in hotel view
and the orange building doesn't look right
7/10
if you read my first post i did say well its really a town view.
Also new new update
added new building and stuff..
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/9656/hotelviewes4.png (http://imageshack.us)

[brodeo]

Looks great, i dont know about the roof shading. It looks very much like a gradient you would use on wordart I think you need to put it so there is one or two transitional colours between the dakr and the light.
Dark Grey [Roof] > Lighter Grey [Curve] > Lightest Grey [Side]
Instead of...
Darkest Grey [Roof] > Darker > Dark > Light > Lighter > Lightest Grey [Side]

And as well, shouldn't the two building next to each other have the same colour sides seeing as the rooves are the same colour?

Looks great though, possibly one of the only alterations worth commenting on seeing as your the only one who can be bothered to edit his alterations to make them better. Repped.

[Mario]

okay Cheep. i edited the roof and pulled the orange building back.
i added football pitch & fallen tree and fixed a few pixel errors too.

http://img474.imageshack.us/img474/4595/hotelviewxx1.png (http://imageshack.us)

[Wootzeh]

Where exactly is your light source? the shadows are all over the place.

[Mario]

updated shadows and such.
i think its pretty much finished now.
http://img459.imageshack.us/img459/3497/hotelviewtg1.png (http://imageshack.us)

[Frank459]

Maybe, stick a few bushes in the park. I like bushes :)

Maybe a few rose bushes? And possibly some flowers?

THEN it will look more like a park :-)

Edit : Why just the little hedges? Why dont you *** hedges all the way around?

It just doesnt look right with it being only 1 side covered.

[Decapitated!]

Urmm so weres the hotel?

[Frank459]

if you read my first post i did say well its really a town view.
Also new new update
added new building and stuff..



Urmm so weres the hotel?

Does that answer your question?

[Oasys]

Very nice, I love the football park :P but is the fountain supposed to be leaking? and the building shadows all face south-west and the tree shadows all face south-east, north-east. Other than that 7/10

[Dom¿]

very good still the brown redish building has a pixel error still good 6/10 + rep

[Black_Apalachi]

The orange building looks wrong... the base of it is quite near the road but when you look at the roof, it seems to go out very far.

The rest looks very nice so far though. :)

Edit: Now seen updates.

The light in the sky goes from right to left but the tree shadows are on the right of them (towards the light sorce). This needs sorting out.

Also, the biggest tree has a dark green circle under it that doesn't look right and the shaddow on its trunk comes down too far. The fallen tree also needs a hole or stump where it has come from.

The modern looking bulding is very nice but the roof is shaded? Also, the shading behind it and it's neighbour needs to be larger to account for both buildings.

The cars need shading (well everything else has). :P Btw I would move the green car along a little bacuse the position it is in now is unrealistic (I know it goes there on the real Hotel View but it looks wrong in a still image).

Finally, the centre circle on the football pitch is far too big, it almost touches the semi-circles!

7/10 overall + Rep :)

[Tyrannic]

Very Nioce, the roof on the orange building doesn't look right.

[lew!]

Yeah, I agree. Looks a bit like a cut away.
+ rep anyway