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Seacat
20-03-2005, 12:29 PM
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Easter is approaching fast! This time next week you'll all be eating Easter Eggs :eusa_danc I want you to write me an Easter-themed Poem, the poem must doesn't have to be long, 4-6 verses is fine, but it must represent:-
Easter
Spring Time
Happiness

To enter this competition you must be a registered member of our forum. Habbox is giving all its members the opportunity to enter this competition, click on the post reply icon.

Your entry should look like this:
Habbo Name - Seacat
Habbox Name - Seacat
Followed by the poem -

Prizes:
1st Place - One Petal Patch, One Basket of Eggs, One Pop-up Egg, One Squidgy Bunny and One Easter Duck
2nd Place - a HC sofa
3rd Place - One Basket of Eggs, One Pop-up Egg, One Squidgy Bunny and One Easter Duck.


And remember to enter this competition you must be a registered member of the Habbox forum.
Follow the link below to go to the competition entry page and click on the post reply icon, leave your habbo name and your entry.

This competition will run until 1st April unless otherwise stated. After that Habbox will pick the best entry and the prize will be handed over in Habbo. Spectate will hand over the prize once the winner has been chosen.

One entry per Habbox Member ONLY.
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Terms and conditions: To prevent foul play, we only allow one entry for each pc. If more entries are sent using the same pc all the entries will be discarded. You can send in your entry until the competition is closed at some time on 1st April 2005. Please be aware that some competitions may be extended, or even closed early due to the number of entries. The winner will be announced on the site and in this forum and will be contacted by Spectate to collect the prize. Habbox has the right to close the competition at any time before the competition ending date and the winner will be judged from all the entries received up to that point. Habbox will be judging the competition any harassment or attempted bribery will see you disqualified and could even get you into trouble on the Habbox Forum. ALL Habbox staff are excluded from participating in Competition, unless Competition states they may. This includes trialists who become staff before this Competition closes. Any entries that break the forum rules in anyway will also be disqualified. Prizes must be claimed within two months of the winner/s being announced. Unclaimed prizes will be used again in a future Competition.

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Winners Announced - 16th April 2005
1st - [email protected]
2nd - hellzfrost
3rd - Zedus

gregzilla
20-03-2005, 02:20 PM
habbo name: GREGZILLA
habbox name: gregzilla
Poem:
easter is near, yay!
its a time when you are happy
and eat chocolate n stuff!
when new life is born,
it celebrates Jesus's re-birth
the greatest day of the year!

hellzfrost
20-03-2005, 04:10 PM
Habbo Name: PM for my Habbo Name, I recently got scammed and don't want to publisice my new name.
Habbox Name: hellzfrost
Entry Poem:

All the doffodils in their flowerbeds,
Resting their sleepy yellow heads,
Snow white bunnys hopping around,
Try to find all those Easter Eggs that cant be found!

My favourite time is Spring!

Spring-time is my favourite time of year,
I get happy and excited as it draws near,
The blissful sun shines up in the sky,
And all the birds fly around way up high.

My favourite time is Spring !

I scoff my egg,
And I have to beg...
..Because chocholate tastes so good,
And I want it all ! (Well I think I should !)

My favourite time is Spring !

Tomush
20-03-2005, 04:13 PM
Habbo Name - !Hyper
Habbox Name - !Hyper

Poem -
How have chicks and rabbits taken over
A holiday of mystical rebirth?
Perhaps the Lord has let them make it over,
Pleased with all the gentlefolk of Earth.
Youngsters needn't dream of agony:
Easter, for children, must wear more festive clothes;
And so the soft, defenseless babes they see
Symbolize Christ's love when He arose.
The Spring was always time for holidays.
Easter fun for tots no truth betrays:
Redemption is approached in many ways.

If You Look Carefully At The First Letters, It Says Happy Easter :)

20-03-2005, 06:15 PM
habbo name: PinksForum
Tip: To find out whether a poem is copied or not simply search the first couple of lines in a search engine ;) (I know 3 so far that have been copied lol :eusa_naug )

Today I found a bunny,
As fluffy as can be,
He carried eggs of every hue,
Of red and gold, of green and blue,

Chocolate eggs and marshmallows,
And eggs of pink and grey,
He hops around on Easter Night,
Then hides the treats just out of sight,


On Easter morn, just after dawn,
The children all wake up,
They look up and down and all around,
Til' all the tasty eggs are found,

Now til' next year his job is done,
His eggs are eaten up,
He goes back to his workshop,
With a skip... a jump... and a HOP.

Hope you like it :)

Seacat
20-03-2005, 06:51 PM
Looking good so far, keep them coming! Ask your friends to take part :)

BlueTails
20-03-2005, 08:03 PM
Habbo/Habbox Name: BlueTails

Entry:

Easter Is A Special Time Of Year
Where Habbos Get New Furni
A Pop Up Egg Or A Rare or 2
Don't Forgot The Christ, the Lord
Or Callie Or Jibbi Or Ione
Easter Is A Special Time Of Year

[Btw, I Knows Its Bobba But Hey!]

Seacat
20-03-2005, 10:15 PM
Competition will resume once it's being moved into the competitions forum. Don't worry your entries won't be discarded :)

Tenchi
22-03-2005, 12:54 PM
Habbo Name: -=Tenchi=-
Habbox Name: Tenchi
Entry Poem:

Twas Easter morn at early dawn
just before the plants were growing.
I met a bob-tail bunnykin
and asked where he was going.
"Tis in the house and out the house
a-tispy, tipsy-toeing,
Tis round the house and 'bout the house
a-lighlty I am going."
"But what is that of every hue
you carry in your basket?"
"Tis eggs of gold and eggs of blue;
I wonder that you ask it.

"Tis chocolate eggs and bonbon eggs
and eggs of red and gray,
For every child in every house
on bonny Easter day."
He perked his ears and winked his eye
and twitched his little nose;
He shook his tail -- what tail he had --
and stood up on his toes.
"I must be gone before the sun;
the east is growing gray;
Tis almost time for bells to chime." --
So he hippety-hopped away.

Thank you for reading my poem I hope I am one of the winners...May the best poem win!! :eusa_clap

Zedus
22-03-2005, 03:03 PM
Name on habbo: :easter-bunny:

There's a story quite funny,
About a toy bunny,
And the wonderful things she can do;
Every bright Easter morning,
Without warning,
She colors eggs, red, green, or blue.

Some she covers with spots,
Some with quaint little dots,
And some with strange mixed colors, too
-- Red and green, blue and yellow,
But each unlike his fellow
Are eggs of every hue.

And it's odd, as folks say,
That on no other day
In all of the whole year through,
Does this wonderful bunny,
So busy and funny,
Color eggs of every hue.

If this story you doubt
She will soon find you out,
And what do you think she will do?
On the next Easter morning
She'll bring you without warning,
Those eggs of every hue. :eusa_clap

lukeisok
22-03-2005, 03:43 PM
Habbo Name: Lukeisok
Habbox Forum Name: Lukeisok
My Entry :


Easter And Spring,
Oh How The Birds Sing,
So Peaceful And Sweet
All In That Little Tweet.

Eggs Full Of Sweets
That Easter Bunny Brings
The Eggs And Many Things
That Summer Afternoon Heat

How You Can Just Fall Asleep
Warming Up My Cold feet
Oh At Easter & Spring
The Most Happy Time It Brings!

Scriptermone
22-03-2005, 03:45 PM
Habbo Name: xxJ-KWONxx
Forum name: Lomen22

Entry:-

I .... Have big Eggs And I cant lie!
The milkiness makes your mouth water,
Who wants An egg?
I want an egg?
Who wants An egg?
I want an egg?
Who wants An egg?
I want an egg?
Lil Chickys Walking down the street oh yeah!
Little chickens Raining down Eggs
What came first the chicken or the egg?


- Lomen22 :D

Bloodkanekiller
22-03-2005, 04:47 PM
habbo name:bloodkanekiller
habbox name:bloodkanekiller


Poem:

Easter is a time of day when you eat easter eggs chocolate,white and all things nice with alot of hollow inside and now is the time of year when you get sick and feel fear but eating chocolate is so great you be eating till half past 8.

But till then youll be saying aww i really hate waiting untill next year but untill its hits 6:00 get your buts down scoffing the lot and dont leave one not even for your mum.

so... ask your freinds how many they ate then you can say i had 368 but till then wait next year untill easter hits its the this time of year but always remember easter is a day when people say hey what a day.

lilangelbabe
23-03-2005, 04:32 AM
Habbo Name: lilangelbabe
Habbox Name: lilangelbabe
Poem:

I saw a mysterious sight yesterday while walking,
It was so white, fluffy, and cute that I couldn't help but gawking.
The creature had a big basket full of colorful eggs,
And it was hopping around on only two legs.
This whimsical character hopped right up to me with its huge, flat feet,
And gave me a tasty chocolate treat!
I asked the furry little thing what the egg was for,
But the only answer I got was one more.
So with my two eggs I set out to find my answer,
I decided to ask the little girl dancer.
The little girl said that the creature was a bunny rabbit,
but THIS rabbit gave out treats to kids that didn't grab at it.
I was proud to recieve a gift better than any pearl,
So I gave one of my eggs to the young girl.
Now I know the Easter Bunny,
Who knew it would look so funny?! :eusa_danc

Spotteh
24-03-2005, 06:33 AM
habbo name: Spotteh
habbox Name: Spotteh
poem :
Habit is the hand that shapes the heart.
A soul becomes the soldier of its faith.
Peace prevails through courage and by art.
Pride is vanity, the preacher saith.
Yet love is sky to mountains and to seas.
Evil and good lie blissful in its arms.
All may find that joy with equal ease,
Sunlight radiant above life's storms.
The character is written on the face
Even as the soul receives its grace,
Restored to innocence and on its knees.

Having walked the tight-lipped Jersey streets,
A house to every inward-turning love,
Peaceful, neat, above all else secure,
Pausing, I am ravished by their beauty.
Years will tell the stories of these streets;
Each house, the joy of its secluded love,
As children come and go, indulged, secure,
Singed or not by life's most awesome beauty.
There is no quarter on these death-strewn streets,
Each house the scene of terror, pain, and love,
Redeemed alone by the passion of its beauty.

Here among the savages we amble
Apart from those not designated dear,
Pleased to watch and wonder as we ramble,
Playing with what else we'd have to fear.
Yes, we are aware of what our game is
Even as we hide behind our smiles,
Arrested in perceiving what our shame is
So long as custom clings and faith beguiles.
There's neither love nor joy but in a gamble
Each must lose before the stakes are clear,
Revealing what, unknown, the heart reviles.

BeckyRox
24-03-2005, 02:52 PM
Jesus was born on this near day,
We eat chocolate,
and feel all gay.
But not thinking about him, I think he would tut.
So its near easter, Remember him

Pulchritudinous
24-03-2005, 03:27 PM
Habbo name: .x-aimee-x.
Habbox name: .x-aimee-x.



The easter poem



The easter bunny, is really in jail,
When easter comes round, he gets let out on bail,
Cause he stole some eggs from a robin bird,
Cause the robin bird was a 'nerd',
All the animals spread the word,
It wasn't long before the police heard,
They caught the bunny, he was on drugs,
He hung out with a group of thugs,
The coppers and bunny made a deal,
He'd give out the eggs, that he did steal,
And thats why we have easter!

lilangelbabe
24-03-2005, 05:12 PM
You might want to check http://poemsforfree.com/eastpo.html because some of the poems are copied from the easter poems on there. :o

Edited By MissAlice - Competitions Manager
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Kirsty
24-03-2005, 08:47 PM
The Easter Bunny Sneaks Over at night,

Not to be seen by any light,

The adults away in the bath,

Or at the pub having a laugh.

The children wake up from their bed,

To find a hidden chocolate egg,

A golden wrapping covering it,

They start to Rip it bit by bit.

The egg has gone,

Went down in one,

Although the taste will last,

Untill the day has passed

-x-Kerrianne-x-
25-03-2005, 10:27 AM
HABBO NAME = -X-KERRIANNE-X-
HABBOX NAME = -X-KERRIANNE-X-
GOOD LUCK EVERYONE!

Spring is here,
That means loads of choccy eggs,
Get up get dressed,
Get out of bed!

Eating and eating all day long,
singing and sining the easter song,
Chocolate here and caramel there,
Im not going anywhere!

I love chocolate,
And it loves me,
Without chocolate,
I wouldnt be me!

Im looking for eggs!
im going and going!
hope you enjoyed my easter poem!

26-03-2005, 05:12 PM
Habbo Name - [email protected]
Habbox Name - [email protected]
Followed by the poem -

Oh easter is coming,
The bunny's ears have sunk.
To fill everyone's stomachs,
With all sorts of junk.

Callie is happy,
Mad as she may be.
But who gives a damn,
That egg aint just for me.

Spring is just so great,
You eat, drink and create.
What on earth can you do,
Without an egg upon your plate.

:eusa_clap :eusa_clap :eusa_clap :eusa_clap :eusa_clap :eusa_clap :eusa_clap

.:.$MuRf.:.
26-03-2005, 08:31 PM
habbo name - .:: sh3lly:. ( <--without space)
habbox ame - .:.$MuRf.:.
poem-

easter is a time of joy, :eusa_danc
and easter egg for each girl and boy,
i love spring,
joy, hapinness, warmth it'll bring,

new life is born, :o
and on easter morn,
we will eat our easter eggs,
but all the fat will go straight to our legs..., :@

spring makes me feel hyper,
while the new life that was born wear theyre dyper,
happy i do feel, :)
and now i will sit and eat my easter meal. :eusa_clap

Billie16
28-03-2005, 12:09 AM
CAN SUME ONE HELP ME I MAED TO GIRLS AND PAYED FOR CREDITS AND HAD A LOT OF STUFF AND AT WEEK I GOT KIKT OF THE 2 OF THEM AND CANT GET BACK IN SO CAN U PLZ NOT DANNED AND CAN I HAVE MY NAMES BACK ONOLINE PLZ I HAVE HC CHARS AND STUFF PLZ AND I HAD A BOY ONE TO FOR MY BRO PLZ PUT THEM BACK UP SO I CAN GET MY STUFF PLZ JUST FOR 2 DAYS PLZ I RELLY WANT MY STUFF BACK THAT I PAYED FOR PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ :'( :Sad: :eusa_pray :wav:

Surname
28-03-2005, 10:34 AM
Habbo Name: Ceremony
Habbox Name: Ceremony

Poem:

Twas the day before Easter and all through the woods,
The bunnies were busy getting their goods.
The eggs were all colored so pretty and bright,
All things were "go" for the big, special night.

The baskets were waiting, all decorated with care,
In hopes that the Bunny soon would be there.
My little brother Sam was asleep in his bed,
While visions of Easter eggs rolled round his head.

And I in my pajamas with the cat on my lap,
I had just settled down for a quick little nap.
When outside the window I heard a great noise,
I sprang from my chair and jumped over some toys.

As quick as a flash to the window I flew,
I pulled up the shade and , OH, what a view.
The moon on the meadow cast a bright golden glow
And the wind blew the flowers to and then fro.

Then all of a sudden from out of nowhere,
Came some lively bunnies, hopping here, hopping there!
Leading the group with ears long and funny
Was a plump all-white rabbit...
That's right...the EASTER BUNNY!

The bunnies hopped past, one, two , three, four,
The rabbit called out and then there were more.
"Come Peter! Come, Flopsy! Come, Benny! Come, Joe!
Now hop along! Hop along! Hop along! GO!"

So up on each doorstep the bunnies did hop,
With baskets of eggs. (Let's hope they don't drop)!
Just at that moment, on the porch down below,
Came the stomping of feet 'Twas the rabbit I know!

As I stepped from my window I heard a loud sound.
Through the door came the rabbit with a leap and a bound.
He was furry and soft from his head to his feet.
To see him so close was really quite neat.

He was surrounded by eggs that had been carefully dyed.
Easter eggs galore he soon would hide.
His eyes were all twinkles, His nose was so pink,
And I can't be too sure but I think he did wink.

He had a kind face and a big fluffy tail
That bobbed up and down like a boat with a sail.
A twitch of his nose and a flick of his ear
Was his way of saying "You've nothing to fear"

He uttered no sound as he hopped all about,
Hiding the eggs and leaving no doubt,
That the Easter Bunny had come like he does every year...
Bringing baskets of happiness to children so dear

x!-=cherry=-!x
30-03-2005, 08:41 AM
Habbo name : x!-=cherry=-!x
Habbox Name : x!-=cherry=-!x
*My easter poem is called - The greedy Bunny * :D
Poem :
The Greedy Bunny!

The little bunny is sick,
He thinks he has the flu.
He can't get out of bed,
And there's still so much to do!
He's going to need some helpers,
But he's not sure just who,
Could you help the little bunny?
Would you know what to do... Like...
Doing all your schoolwork,
Wriggling you ears and nose,
Eating all your carrots,
And hopping on your toes?
GUESS WHAT!
The little bunny is better,
He didn't have the flu.
He just ate too many jelly beans,
And chocolate bunnies, too!

* Tip : Some people are taking others ideas.. :( *

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