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boyslikegirls
17-11-2006, 02:34 AM
just a room in an apartment in a big city i guess. ;/
http://img453.imageshack.us/img453/1469/sweetroomnn9.png
btw, i know the shading reverses on the table, but i cba to fix that right now so i'll do that later.
rate /10.
cc pls too.

Verrou
17-11-2006, 06:19 AM
The second plant to the left has just been pasted on top as it is over the square thing.

Ver.

Browney
17-11-2006, 07:16 AM
The plant seems 2D. Seems it has texture but no shape.

Plants are very hard to make look realistic AND 3D on habbo.

Other than that, nice.

Very nice indeed.

benjamin
17-11-2006, 07:34 AM
The second plant to the left has just been pasted on top as it is over the square thing.

Ver.
no. that's a little seat thing like what's opposite

it looks really good jerremy, well done :]

Yeum
17-11-2006, 08:11 AM
Superb ! Well done mate +rep

Oasys
17-11-2006, 10:50 AM
I like the little globe :P
But the seats are a bit low , don't you think?
8/10

micky.blue.eyes
17-11-2006, 03:21 PM
- No shades
- Plant is pasted on top of the seat
- Plants look weird.
- Table legs are wonky, but I think it's suposed to be like that.

7/10

boyslikegirls
17-11-2006, 09:43 PM
- No shades
- Plant is pasted on top of the seats

7/10
no it isnt.

Middlesbrough
17-11-2006, 09:58 PM
-the shading is wierd
-the tree overlaps the chair
The tabple dosent look right for some reason
i dont realy like 7.5/10
Red circle is were the plant overlaps
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/9626/ownedsr7.png

boyslikegirls
17-11-2006, 09:59 PM
-the shading is wierd
-the tree overlaps the chair
The tabple dosent look right for some reason
i dont realy like 7.5/10
Red circle is were the plant overlaps
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/9626/ownedsr7.png
it doesn't overlap for the last time.

Middlesbrough
17-11-2006, 10:01 PM
ah, i see try to not merge the lines next time because it does look like it is overlapping ok 8/10 i thing the table is supposed 2 be dat way..:s

der u go micky posted constructive critisiscm :P

Minix
17-11-2006, 10:04 PM
Can I just say that it obviously doesn't overlap? The chair just doesn't extend far enough to overlap the plant. :S

So yah.

Um. I like the cityscape in the backgrounds - nice effect :D

And the lamps are good.

boyslikegirls
17-11-2006, 10:10 PM
i added some shadows, not sure if they are right though, i suck at shadows ;/
i also raised that chair 2 pixels, so everyone wont be like "OMG DAT OVA LAPZ"

http://www.sparkload.com/uploads/546a0-sweetroom.png

.Lynn
17-11-2006, 11:55 PM
You need to add some shadows. 6/10.

boyslikegirls
18-11-2006, 12:32 AM
You need to add some shadows. 6/10.look one post back ;)

micky.blue.eyes
18-11-2006, 09:37 AM
i added some shadows, not sure if they are right though, i suck at shadows ;/
i also raised that chair 2 pixels, so everyone wont be like "OMG DAT OVA LAPZ"

http://www.sparkload.com/uploads/546a0-sweetroom.png

Not bad, not bad. The shading under the table isn't big enough though. You forgot to give the snowglobe a shade.

The shadings are going the wrong way though, the light is coming from the window (normally), yet the shadows are going towards the windows. =/

boyslikegirls
18-11-2006, 06:51 PM
Not bad, not bad. The shading under the table isn't big enough though. You forgot to give the snowglobe a shade.

The shadings are going the wrong way though, the light is coming from the window (normally), yet the shadows are going towards the windows. =/the light source is coming from the right side going torwards the wall.
i'm adding some bamboo blinds and curtains too later if i cba.

boyslikegirls
22-11-2006, 02:45 AM
You forgot to give the snowglobe a shade. oh ye and there is a shade on it but you can't really see it.

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