First attempt at a design

[Mr.Sam]

Hey, i was playing around in psp8 and came up with this rather plain design, because it's my first I'm expecting a lot of problems with it and comments and criticism would be great. no idea why I watermarked it, I was bored I guess.
edit: having another look at it with out the tool bars of psp, it is rather small on my screen :l
http://img66.imageshack.us/img66/2002/layout1wmcq9.png

[alexxxxx]

Too normal, nothing special. It needs something but I'm not sure what.

[RNelson]

Don't use psp8 please use Photoshop cs2 ok C+C it's too plain the whole thing looks like wip nothing to it the black banner should maybe have detail in it atleast improve font try mistral and the font is too big on everything also try include a image in banner the red line thing is too fat maybe cut it in half and get rid of that pattern thing in it because it looks stupid other than that for a 1st design 6/10

- Ryan Nelson


Hey, i was playing around in psp8 and came up with this rather plain design, because it's my first I'm expecting a lot of problems with it and comments and criticism would be great. no idea why I watermarked it, I was bored I guess.

http://img66.imageshack.us/img66/2002/layout1wmcq9.png

[[N]]

Whats psp8

On topic: the layout is alright bit too plain.

[RNelson]

Paintshop pro 8
Whats psp8

On topic: the layout is alright bit too plain.

[tekni]

Good concept of the design, but it's impractical due to it's size.

Is good for first, +Rep.

[RYANNNNN]

Why shouldn't he use PSP8, I know alot of people who are better than you RNelson on PSP8 than you are on PS.

[Ryan.]

I suggest brightening it up a bit and adding a bit more detail it just looks plain atm..

Also a little bigger would be nice ;)

+rep for try though

[Lycan]

looks alright for a first attempt at design. well done +rep