love poem something i just came up with rate + c&c plz

[Tiuhdur]

like a wave our love is always moving
my heart belongs to you
but you know ill always be careing
for our love is true

i remember our first kiss
like the heavens came to earth
back then we were together
yes together forever

but time went bye
and now your gone
i dont even know where ive gone wrong
is this the end?
is this the end of our love....?

[Tiuhdur]

someone plz comment over 24 hours ago someone plz!

[DiscoPat]

i realy like it, +rep

[Tiuhdur]

thx for comment and rep

[Yggdrasill]

i quite like it actually. :D 500th post.

[Tiuhdur]

gratz nd thx