Beautiful Night

[Misawa]

Snowflake waltz,
Icicle twist
Winter’s arrived,
Frozen mist

Frosty trees,
Wintered leaves
Delicate white,
Beautiful night

Swords of ice,
Frozen in time
Weathered wood
Snowdust’s rhyme

Season’s greeting,
Winter’s offering
Greet the cold,
Offer the warmth

[Minix]

Erm, quite nice :P

You shouldn't change that way your poem is laid out... it goes:
ABCB
AABB
ABCB
ABCD

Lol. Cute tho <3