Pixelated Kitchen || Please Rate

[AJC2004]

Hey.. this is a pixelated kitchen i made from scratch.. please rate :)

http://www.habbo-extreme.com/Pixelatedkitchen.html

Thx,
AJC

[the wombats]

very good 8/10 you shouls make it as a proper habbo room, its alot easier an looks better

[Dirgeofcerberus]

Man that is so amazing
You could try making it look like Habbo, would be a challenge though
9.5/10

[AJC2004]

Lol, yea... could be hard..

Damn.. Ive just seen how it turns out and it looks all fuzzy so i will try and upload it to my domain...

[Jasmin]

I Have soo seen that before, !
and i will Hunt..but if its yours..7/10

[AJC2004]

:S How have you seen that before? Its mine.. i spent 3 days on it and.. im not the sorta person that would lie

[AngJum]

That's really nice Adam ^_^ I give it 9/10

[Revis]

It is his, but i think he used a guide on a pixel tutorial, but added his own style. I looks pretty good if not a bit boxy on the seats and 2d on the glasses. It would be cool to see you do this kitchen just in a habbo room.

[AJC2004]

Guide :S I didnt use a guide lol i just knew how to make an isometric room and i just added things then thought about lighting...

[GommeInc]

It is his but he made through a Pixel Tutorial where they teach you to make a Kitchen

[the wombats]

heres my swimming pool i made http://img68.exs.cx/img68/2339/swimming1zf2gk.png

[Janumz]

Erm.. I think i've seen that somewhere before..
Did you follow a tutorial, and put it in habbo scale or something?
Hm.. If it is yours.. its great, 9/10

[GommeInc]

Erm.. I think i've seen that somewhere before..
Did you follow a tutorial, and put it in habbo scale or something?
Hm.. If it is yours.. its great, 9/10
Thats exactly what it is :)

[AJC2004]

Why is everyone saying its a tutorial :S I try and make something myself and everyone says i didnt make it :( but i know i did

[Jasmin]

Erm.. I think i've seen that somewhere before..
Did you follow a tutorial, and put it in habbo scale or something?
Hm.. If it is yours.. its great, 9/10

Yay someone too back me up, i think ive seen this on a japan habbo fan website, look if its yours though then its good :)

[AJC2004]

Yes it is mine.. and i dont know how you saw it on a japan website :S i spent 3 days on it....

[TommyH]

Amazing 9/10

1 Day Later ....

Realises IT's a Cheat Tutorial Made 2/10 now. >:(

[Revis]

Were not saying its not yours, it just looks an awfull lot like the one in this guide.
Kitchen Guide (Scroll to bottem) (http://rhysd.syntesis.org/tutorial/chapter6point3.html)

[mr.parasols]

If you search on google : Pixel-Art it comes up on first page :)

[AJC2004]

I might delete this thread coz u guyz are just trying to say its rubbish arent ya.. i tried my best.. what more can i do?

[TommyH]

It Does That's Very True Matey CHEAT !

[Revis]

It Does That's Very True Matey CHEAT !
It's a bit harsh saying he's a cheat, he used a guide to try and improve and the outcome was pretty good, he didn't copy the picture and say it was his own, he remade it himself so it is his picture. Guides are there to help us, but using them doesn't make us a cheat. Unless its in GCSE or A Levels during the exam, then it does.

[AJC2004]

I didnt cheat actually... If you look its different..so you cant accuse me... i wont bother posting next time if you guyz are just gonna humiliate me..

[GommeInc]

This is basically it but he has done a very good making it habbo scale good job

http://rhysd.syntesis.org/tutorial/kitchenINT_7.gif

[AJC2004]

You complimenting me?

Thx mate... nice to know someone cares.. :)

[Dozza]

Look You Guys AJC and I are Best Mates and i know AJC wouldn't use a Poxy tutorial. He is A Guy who makes his own Stuff.
You Question Him. You Question Me. You Question me and i get ANGRY >:(

[AJC2004]

Oh and TommyH please post your version of the kitchen on here because obviously mine is so rubbish and you can do better eh.. so go on.. i wanna take a look...

Then you can insult me with your rude comments about my work..

[Infrontation]

Well Apart From The Fact All You've Done Is Habbo Size It, It Stills Looks Bad. 3/10

[Syco]

You complimenting me?

Thx mate... nice to know someone cares.. :)


I care,I know you made this yourself.
Thats a smaller room,If u did copy the layout who cares?
U did a good job on makin a kitchen even if u looked at that 1
Nice job mate.
10/10 :)

[Luayminator]

there is nothing wrong with using a guide to help you.

[AJC2004]

Thx to everyone that is complimenting me on my attempt but i think the people that are trying to 'get their own way' and saying i didnt make it need to think again about what they have said.. Ya know.. it really hurts when you spent like 3 days on something and then.. all of a sudden you have this random rumour that you've copied this and that.. it just doesnt feel like you should bother any more..

Well.. im gonna carry on making them but when you rate please dont post hurtfull posts. Anyway thats the negative stuff gone and i would just like to say thankyou to everyone that has been thoughtful about what they have said and complimented me,

Many Thx,
AJC

[Snowboarding]

That's decent. Good non-habbo pixel work ;)

[Janumz]

Omg
I didnt say it was bad, or that you copied it.
i said "if its yours, i love it, well done 10/10"
I didnt acuse you of stealing, I just said i've seen something similar, but you remade it to habbo scale.

[:-Mystical.Dave-]

I might delete this thread coz u guyz are just trying to say its rubbish arent ya.. i tried my best.. what more can i do?

You tried your best, copying the picture lol ;)

[the wombats]

how do u delete old threads

[Mr.Kylee]

I've been on the forums for ages so here's the deal-
You used a guide. It's the same room as in the one of pixel tutorials but it's made in bigger version. It's really basic nothing big, sorry. Plus you half copied it :p

[gregzilla]

its ok but the glasses aren't too good and the gray thing above the stove is either out of line or too far out, if you look at it you'll know what i mean, its an impossible shape!
8/10
9/10 for effort (but 8/10 tho)

[Staceh2]

It Is AJC's, It look's like somebody else's because i have seen the original, where it is a much SMALLER version, but i like it! <3

[AJC2004]

Are you guyz blind?!? How is it the same room! Look at the damn thing!! lol its totally different!

[the wombats]

post the smaller 1, i wanna see wot it looks like, i dont start sayin ppl cheat, i'd say its help if ye new at thm, i shuld no

[AJC2004]

If you look further back through the thread it should be there..

[the wombats]

no he tutorial 1

[the wombats]

i see, it looks like u used it as a guide, u aint cheated

Edited by Soyers (Forum Moderator): Please dont double post, simply edit your previous post.

[AJC2004]

Thx for that... its what i have been trying to say all along lol.. i havent cheated.. i have simply used something that teaches you...

[the wombats]

add me on habbo same name, im new at makin alts 2. thts if u r

[SSC7]

Well Apart From The Fact All You've Done Is Habbo Size It, It Stills Looks Bad. 3/10
I agree. You need alot more highlighting and the stools dont look square the way they're positioned on the rod. Its also a little bland, way to many plain cabinets. You put to much space between the center counter and the wall counters aswell.

[Xero]

:S How have you seen that before? Its mine.. i spent 3 days on it and.. im not the sorta person that would lie

You spent 3 days on this? Well.. I suggest you take up something else other than pixelling. Black lines everywhere, black lines = Bad, in pixel art, habbo styled or not. Everything is square, You have about 3 different light sources, there is no detailed shading, and your "isometric" circles are not isometric. Just plain bad. Not even gonna bother rating.

[Jasmin]

This is basically it but he has done a very good making it habbo scale good job

http://rhysd.syntesis.org/tutorial/kitchenINT_7.gif


Hmmm That is probably where i saw it..
anyway Hay, it dosnt matter if you took a tutorial or guide They are there too help :) anyway good alt

[AJC2004]

Why cant people just give advice on here instead of saying.. "Its too bad im not gonna rate it" or "its rubbish" for example..

You spent 3 days on this? Well.. I suggest you take up something else other than pixelling. Black lines everywhere, black lines = Bad, in pixel art, habbo styled or not. Everything is square, You have about 3 different light sources, there is no detailed shading, and your "isometric" circles are not isometric. Just plain bad. Not even gonna bother rating.

Cant he take out the negative things and just say.. i think you need to do this.. and that.

It really hurts when you do an alt and people say its rubbish...

[Pawf]

You spent 3 days on this? Well.. I suggest you take up something else other than pixelling. Black lines everywhere, black lines = Bad, in pixel art, habbo styled or not. Everything is square, You have about 3 different light sources, there is no detailed shading, and your "isometric" circles are not isometric. Just plain bad. Not even gonna bother rating.

Dude, when you were first doing pixel art, did you polish off a very good attempt at a whole room in 10 minutes? I doubt it, and don't say something snobbish like "When I first started I was excellent, blah blah blah" he's given it a good effort and, with a bit of tweaking, it will be a satisfying piece of pixel art.

[Isaac]

Dont listen to Xero he cant accept the fact that your such a good artist :P

But anyways I like it so 9.6543/10

[Jasmin]

You spent 3 days on this? Well.. I suggest you take up something else other than pixelling. Black lines everywhere, black lines = Bad, in pixel art, habbo styled or not. Everything is square, You have about 3 different light sources, there is no detailed shading, and your "isometric" circles are not isometric. Just plain bad. Not even gonna bother rating.

*Cough* Yea That is Kinda *Takes deep Breath* Snobbish.... *Wipes Brow*
Xero I admire your work and your an insperation to any young maybe soon too be pixel artists out there, but theres no need for that, i mean I Learnt the hard way with horiible critizizum (I was a snobby cow then anyway) :rolleyes: LOL i dont want him too be the same as me ! (Lol) As i Got very upset aswell and thats probably why i didnt listen too any critizizum because it was mean, but if your nice Then You could be the next Corboyn or Ixxel or whoever! I mean when i first started doing alts, i looked up To Lauren (.Mcgovlou) Too be as good as her, but when i realilsed what shading was I was Up too the standard where i am Now, A Habbo Fashion Desighner :D and I am a Very proud Little Poo ! But i dont really care! (am I going of topic here!
im sorry i accused you, I Think Its good, Not habboey but purfect for any pixel website :)

[AJC2004]

Hey thx so much for that its really given me confidence to carry on... :')

[Xero]

Why cant people just give advice on here instead of saying.. "Its too bad im not gonna rate it" or "its rubbish" for example..

You spent 3 days on this? Well.. I suggest you take up something else other than pixelling. Black lines everywhere, black lines = Bad, in pixel art, habbo styled or not. Everything is square, You have about 3 different light sources, there is no detailed shading, and your "isometric" circles are not isometric. Just plain bad. Not even gonna bother rating.

Cant he take out the negative things and just say.. i think you need to do this.. and that.

It really hurts when you do an alt and people say its rubbish...

Firstly Aj to you -
I call it like it is, I don't just tell people what they want to hear. Would you rather me say "Its awesome!"? If you want to improve.. You certainly wouldn't.
I told you what to do, Get rid of the black lines, for outlines use darker versions of the inside colour/s and for the lines representing edges at the front, make them a lighter colour then the inside colour/s. I've told you to make it less square, which you should do, get rid of the different light sources, and decide on one, make the circles isometric and give it detailed shading.
I said all that, and your saying all I did was say its rubbish?
I'm trying to help, and some of these other jackasses (Isaac for example) are not helping you by saying stuff like "dont listen to xero", basically what he's saying is "don't listen to critisism", which is just stupid. I didn't mean to hurt your feelings, I just want to help make you a better artist.

To Serjj -
Yes your right, I wasn't a good artist when I started out. You know how I improved? I improved by listening to other peoples critisism, not by listening to the people saying "its perfect" and "10/10". Critisism is the most helpful thing when your trying to improve at something, and i really believe that people would rather improve then not. If you don't think that, your a dead set idiot :\ As you said Serjj, he's given it an effort, and with some tweaking, it could be nice. All I'm telling him is how to tweak it. Your just sitting there telling him to tweak it. Can you say "unhelpful".

To Isaac -
Don't think I'll bother with you ;).

[Crying-Angel]

it may be harsh but xero is right, we all gotta listen to the people who know what they are talking about and xero is one of the best, he didnt just say that ur work was rubbish, but if he had sed that ur work was great would it motivate u to prove him wrong? i think not...
when i started out pixel drawing i didnt have anyone to critisize me so i never progresssed till i actully started to show other people what i had done and they gave me tips on how to make it better, yes i got a few "its ****" but u gotta listen to everything else they say, more often than not if they are a good pixel artist they will know what they are on about.

andyways im just rambling now but i think u probs got my point! lol

[G-flow]

9/10 very well made :p

[Seny]

wow solja is just posting everywhere isnt he

[G-flow]

Thats the point in the forum :) , to POST

[Pawf]

Xero, I agree, criticism is the best way to learn. However, comments such as "I suggest you take up something other than pixelling" and "I'm not even gunna bother rating" are pretty hurtful things to say. If you were just starting out, you wouldn't want people to tell you to give up. You would want them to criticise (like you did) and tell how to improve (also, like you did).
I agree with you on the fact that you need criticism to learn, but comments such as the above are uncalled for.

[Crying-Angel]

but serjj with comments like that it can make people want to prove them wrong. which means they carry on and try harder next time.

[Pawf]

On the contrary, I think comments like that are degrading.

[Crying-Angel]

well personally they just make me try harder, i dont like to be wrong n if sumone tells now i shouldnt do sumthing or i can do something i always do it anyway.... mayb thats just me but it dont bother me if ppl think my alts aint good... it kinda makes me want to try and do better when ppl dont like it.

[Pawf]

It doesn't bother me if people think my alts aren't good either! I have absolutely NOTHING against criticism, as long as it has a point.
SOME of the things Xero said in his post were uncalled for, and some can be used by AJC2004 to create improved pixel art in the future.

[AJC2004]

I agree with Serjj to be honest... its great that you have given me some things to work on but the things like... "im not even gonna bother rating" and " You should take up something other that pixel art" are a bit hurtfull...

[Xero]

Just trying to get you to work harder, and try more. But you know what? I'm not gonna bother anymore. Have fun with all the 8/10's etc. that give no help whatsoever towards your pixel art skills...

[Pawf]

Xero, dude, I'm not saying that at all!
I don't have problems with "3/10 you need to highlight black lines and make fully isometric". It's stuff like "I suggest you take up something else than pixelling" that I have a problem with. Get me?

[Luayminator]

Xero thinks everyone should be like him

[x!-=cherry=-!x]

its great i dont think you have copied if he did it would be excellent .. but i belive you it looks GREAT!.. sorry i said it twice it would look good if habbo made that into a peice of furniture to put in our rooms! :) 9.9/10

[Xero]

Xero thinks everyone should be like him

No, I just think no one should be a complete jackass like you :)

[TommyH]

Errrm I Know there In't anyfink Wrong wiv tutorials.
It's just u copied it off Google and Called it yours.

[Pawf]

It's not copied off Google, nitwit

[scottish]

Its not there :s