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PigsNose
10-12-2006, 11:06 AM
Okay I wrote this when I dunno, I think I was about ten. I was quite proud of it then.

I'm watching and waiting
By the brick wall
I see them coming
And I hear them call

I feel so weak
They laugh in my ear
They grab all my books
I'm in terrible fear

I have bruises and cuts
All over my face
I limp all the way home
Though I am being chased

They say nasty words
They pull my hair
I cry and cry
It seems not fair

That night I went to the bathroom
I cried and cried
I took an overdose of pills
And that night I died

Shinigami
10-12-2006, 05:01 PM
Umg thats well good and sad ;[

DiscoPat
10-12-2006, 05:20 PM
one of the best, +rep

Caution
10-12-2006, 05:27 PM
wow, thats good:)
+rep

PigsNose
10-12-2006, 05:31 PM
Thanks xx

Rimikari
10-12-2006, 08:11 PM
It's good ;3

Moosik
12-12-2006, 08:32 PM
Meh. Stop making me cry you poop =[

PigsNose
12-12-2006, 08:34 PM
Lol Megan.
So do you like it? :)

RyaREXIC
15-12-2006, 05:05 PM
I love your poems +rep (l)

Prowler!
16-12-2006, 10:28 AM
Pretty coolio!!!1

Andy?
16-12-2006, 01:40 PM
I'm not joking, that is one of the best poems I've ever read, and I'm a big reader lol.

PigsNose
19-12-2006, 05:07 PM
Um.. thanks :)

Joe!
20-12-2006, 02:43 PM
Thats a really good poem +rep

PigsNose
21-12-2006, 04:37 PM
Thanks.
Check out my other poem which ISN'T depressing.
A Poppy.
No one has replied yet.

allykin
28-12-2006, 12:00 PM
That was v.good
upsetting to
+rep

PigsNose
29-12-2006, 10:30 AM
Uh thanks. Someone post a reply on my other poem please
=]

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