A quick one

[PigsNose]

This is one I wrote in about ten minutes, just a quick one. Btw, it is a bit weird...

Home.
Screaming and shouts
Slaps on the face
Kicks and scratches
Home.

School.
Laughs and points
Punches in the stomach
Spits and bites
School.

Home.
Being throwing against
The cold brick wall
All I feel is pain
Home.

School.
Being shoved into
The cracked mirror
All I feel is pain
School.

Home.
Grabbed by the neck
Thrown into the shelf
All my air sucked in at once
Home.

School.
Grabbed by the ankles
Thrown off the floor
All my air sucked in at once
School.

Running.
They’re catching me up
Screaming and shouting
I can run forever
Running.

Caught.
Grabbed by the shoulders
Swiveled around
Kicked in the stomach
Caught.

Silence.
No pain no fear
Only silence.
I must’ve died.
Silence.

Good bye.
Good bye all my enemies
Good bye all my family
I hated you so much
Good bye.

[extravagant]

It's pretty repeatitive and pretty depressing, only being honest.

[tbh imo no m8]

It's pretty repeatitive and pretty depressing, only being honest.
I'll take your word for it

[Fonejacker]

Not goos sorry Not saying i could better ... Cause i can't but sorry :(

[Moosik]

*Blubs Into Tissue*

[DiscoPat]

I like it, +Rep.

[PigsNose]

Thanks for your comments :)

[gosling]

Wow, that is so depressing. At least it's a tad unique...

[Chip.Monk]

Yeah, im sorry but i cant say i like it, its just to depressing. Also, its basiclly just some kid getting beat up for a whole poem, i prefer to watch some kind of ninja getting beaten on. Also it was depressing.

[Browney]

See. What did I say about the depressing poems.

[PigsNose]

So you're telling me I write depressing poems?
No one has even replied on my poppy poem. No one even read it. If you did, you would SEE that not all my poems are depressing.
Geez.

[English]

I don't like it atall, to me that isn't poetry. But hey, one mans rubbish is another mans luxury & all that jazz

[Fonejacker]

WHAT DO U MEAN HALF-CAST!