My Habbo Car :)

[simon305]

http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/4315/simon305scardoneoy5.png (http://imageshack.us)

Ok I Spent Ages On This :D

C+C Please

I had a few problems with the wheels and winscreen but i think it looks ok

Tell me if it needs a numberplate

[Test:Tube:Baby]

wow
thats really cool
9.5/10
it may just be me
but i think the inside bit of wheels could be a bit rounder
will give rep when i can :D

[roaddemon]

Too square for my liking.
But its alright, 8/10

[simon305]

i know my wheels arnt round, im not good at wheels

its very square cos its a old style car

[Test:Tube:Baby]

its very square cos its a old style car


fair point

[simon305]

if you wanna try recolor it im ok with that, just saying :D

[Test:Tube:Baby]

hmmmmm

it mite look good with a number plate


depends what the plate looks like :D

[Lubricant]

That is really good. +REP (When I can)

[Nuct]

Very Good!! 9/10 ;)
+Rep :eusa_danc

[PaintYourTarget]

Very square and simple.
Lacks detail.
etc.
Mediocre, at best.

[simon305]

http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/6310/sizcartwoodi1.png (http://imageshack.us)

Any Better

[boyslikegirls]

theres not much detail.

[Sammeth.]

I prefer the brown over the black one.

Erm...for some reason the back part looks to pointy...I'm not too sure on the wheels [though you have said that you did have difficulty]. I also think it lacks a bit of detail. There are a lot better habbo cars on here.

8/10 - cus its still a good alt. x)

[Mr.Big]

Its pretty good, but it lacks in detail, the wheels arent round, the interior is BORING, the back is too pointy. 6/10

[blah blah blah]

Thats rather good. i like it. tho, like everyone else has said, the back is too pointy. fix that up some how and ill give ya +rep
9.5/10

[benjamin]

http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/6310/sizcartwoodi1.png (http://imageshack.us)

Any Better
i prefer that version, but as others has said it does lack detail.

[Kieran$]

9/10. Too Flat Even Tires Are! Good Try Though.

[simon305]

you people dont know how hard that was to make

[Sammeth.]

you people dont know how hard that was to make
Doesnt mean you should give bad rep to people who give you critisism (constructive at that). I would understand giving bad rep for "Yeh its crap pls innit" but not for "8/10 - cus its still a good alt. x)"

The alt is still good, but the artist has an attitude problem.

[GommeInc]

you people dont know how hard that was to make
So? It maybe hard to make it, but it isn't that hard to improve on it. I think the back needs to be straight rather than pointy, it doesn't seem to look very realistic with an extremely pointy back as it has right now.

[simon305]

So? It maybe hard to make it, but it isn't that hard to improve on it. I think the back needs to be straight rather than pointy, it doesn't seem to look very realistic with an extremely pointy back as it has right now.

i did do some editing http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/9383/gotdanbrownet0.png (http://imageshack.us)

trying some looks


the real car is pointy tho at the back

[Mr.Big]

i did do some editing http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/9383/gotdanbrownet0.png (http://imageshack.us)

trying some looks


the real car is pointy tho at the back



The back is horrible, it should have two of those things, not one on the right side, the rims look like dinner plates and the wheels are like lego, the interior is way to plain, I never knew wheels have a 5 inch circumfrence.
The lights and the hood is good, but the shading on the side is atrocious.
It looks like a paint job, thats how horrible the shading is. I had no clue that shading goes from bottom to the top. It should go like this:

Light
less light
little bit dark
dark

Not like this:

Dark
Little bit dark
Less light
light

Also Ive never seen a window paper thick. The bumper should bigger.
I see a MAJOR pixel error in the back tire. It looks like theres no glass in the windows.
So yes, there is a TON of constructive criticism, but other then that, I think your getting the hang of it, it looks nice.

I give it 5/10.

[-Multi-]

mines better

3/10

to simple and no shadin at all
also looks really square.. 3/10

r u greco or jay or alterasion??

[simon305]

The back is horrible, it should have two of those things, not one on the right side, the rims look like dinner plates and the wheels are like lego, the interior is way to plain, I never knew wheels have a 5 inch circumfrence.
The lights and the hood is good, but the shading on the side is atrocious.
It looks like a paint job, thats how horrible the shading is. I had no clue that shading goes from bottom to the top. It should go like this:

Light
less light
little bit dark
dark

Not like this:

Dark
Little bit dark
Less light
light

Also Ive never seen a window paper thick. The bumper should bigger.
I see a MAJOR pixel error in the back tire. It looks like theres no glass in the windows.
So yes, there is a TON of constructive criticism, but other then that, I think your getting the hang of it, it looks nice.

I give it 5/10.

LMAO OK

[Mr.Big]

LMAO OK


Lmao? :rolleyes:

[blah blah blah]

1. Make the grill lines on the front of the car stand out stronger.
2. Shading is totally wrong (like mr.Big said) all over the car.
3. No shine on the Window.
4. MAJOR pixel error on back tire.
5. There should be two back thingys(dunno what there called) On the back of the car.

I cant really see the main photo, but it the alt dosent look much like it.

I know you said you work hard on this but when ya look at it closely you havent done very well, just a big fat alt.

6/10 (Already made a rating but changing it cause of the edit)

[Catzsy]

Very good +rep :)

[simon305]

1. Make the grill lines on the front of the car stand out stronger.
2. Shading is totally wrong (like mr.Big said) all over the car.
3. No shine on the Window.
4. MAJOR pixel error on back tire.
5. There should be two back thingys(dunno what there called) On the back of the car.

I cant really see the main photo, but it the alt dosent look much like it.

I know you said you work hard on this but when ya look at it closely you havent done very well, just a big fat alt.

6/10 (Already made a rating but changing it cause of the edit)


thats my testing page noob not the alt your gonna pay with -rep!!!

Edited by Catzsy (Forum Super Moderator) - Please don't be rude to others. Thx:)

[Mr.Big]

thats my testing page noob not the alt your gonna pay with -rep!!!


OMG LEAVE!!!!!! YOUR SUCH A JERK!!!!!!! HE GAVE YOU C/C AND YOUR SUPPOSED TO USE IT! Im getting so freaking fed up with you! Leave!:eusa_wall :@ :@


Edited by Catzsy (Forum Super Moderator) - Please do not be rude or try to bully members to leave. Thx:)

[siz]

mr big u got me banned didnt you.. didnt you

[Mr.Big]

mr big u got me banned didnt you.. didnt you


No, you got yourself banned. Control your actions, maybe this will teach you how to have people like you?

[siz]

*Removed*

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[Mr.Big]

WHY DIDU COBE BACK... GO AWAY..... I WAS HERE FIRST AND ILL BE EHRE CAST GO SUCK OFF SOME OTHER PLACE LIKE CLUBHABBO


You know this isnt helping your reputation on Simon305.

[siz]

WHO CARES IM BANNED TILL 20007

[Mr.Big]

WHO CARES IM BANNED TILL 20007


2007 is around the corner :rolleyes:

[blah blah blah]

*removed*

and mr.big, this "he" is a she lol

LOL and thank you to the 2 people who +repped me for simons -Rep just cause i gave my c+c i shall give them + rep 2 ! :)

Edited by micky.blue.eyes (Super Moderator): Please don't be rude towards other members, thanks.

[Mr.Big]

*removed*

and mr.big, this "he" is a she lol

LOL and thank you to the 2 people who +repped me for simons -Rep just cause i gave my c+c i shall give them + rep 2 ! :)

Edited by micky.blue.eyes (Super Moderator): Please don't be rude towards other members, thanks.
Sorry for calling you a he, lol. Oh, I cant rep you again.

[Black_Apalachi]

Wow that's cool. :o

It does need a little more detail - maybe add the hood folded down at the back and a number plate. ;)