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Mrs.McCall
11-12-2006, 10:00 PM
Well since I got my job back as Writer in September I haven't really wrote anything here exclusivly for here so here we are. This is a poem about being so broken hearted nothing is left.

Time has moved on
Yet still I have not
I lie in darkness
My tears are my own company
Shelved by your anger
Shattered by you again
Your love is something I'll never get over
I believe it is called Denial
The state of mind which tells us not to believe
I wish this were all a lie
Something that I could ignore
But no
The sudden breeze in the hallway
Is a stark reminder of the truth
I'm left completely shattered
A broken man because of you
Sometimes I feel strong enough
To let in some light
But that just makes me see myself
And I can't handle that
Thinking makes me realise
The nothing now will ever be the same
So I lie hear numbly
Grasping on to whatever remains.

PigsNose
12-12-2006, 08:32 PM
Wondeful,
I love it.
9/10
:)

DiscoPat
03-02-2007, 06:13 PM
excellent

velvet
04-02-2007, 07:03 PM
It's great as usual. I love your poems :] +rep.

Mrs.McCall
04-02-2007, 11:14 PM
Thanks :)

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