Skate Park Piece 2

[Everlong]

I added a fun box it doesn't realy go with the Rollin/QP because the shading doesn't need to be as detailed to get the affect of a slope.
the only reason the shading is so detailed on the QP is because it is curved and the light hits it diferently, so the funbox only needs one shade as the sun is hitting a flat pannel.
C&C the usual plz improvements too.

http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/6971/doublepiecevo6.png

[ExtraKen]

I added a fun box it doesn't realy go with the Rollin/QP because the shading doesn't need to be as detailed to get the affect of a slope.
the only reason the shading is so detailed on the QP is because it is curved and the light hits it diferently, so the funbox only needs one shade as the sun is hitting a flat pannel.
C&C the usual plz improvements too.

http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/6971/doublepiecevo6.png

Thats!! hot :D i love it :D maybe make it grey colours?

still 10/10

and + Rep if i can :)

[Everlong]

Thats!! hot :D i love it :D maybe make it grey colours?

still 10/10

and + Rep if i can :)

Not a bad idea i'll try that now :)

[Everlong]

Can't edit sorry:

heres the grey (concrete) version. not a fan of concrete skateparks my self but it looks good lol.

http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/8229/doublepiecegreyby0.png

[Blinger1]

make the lips more shiny as in steel otherwise nice +rep i dont like the box thing :( 9/10 :D

[Tiuhdur]

thats amazin +rep edit: wen i can remind me plz lol

[PaintYourTarget]

Pixel Artist CC
Vary the textures, such as have some as concrete and others as wood.
When using wood, try and add planks and make it look more realistic.
There are also some very unnessessary highlights.

Skater CC
The fun box looks kinder steep, maybe try and flatten it slightly.
The divide on the fun box could do with being a bit wider, so you can actually skate ontop of it.
Also, add some rails around the top of the quarter pipe and a lip, so it looks more complete.

[DJ-Ali]

V. good. The grey version looks pretty cool. You know need to put skaters in.
9/10 & +rep

[Everlong]

Pixel Artist CC
Vary the textures, such as have some as concrete and others as wood.
When using wood, try and add planks and make it look more realistic.
There are also some very unnessessary highlights.

Skater CC
The fun box looks kinder steep, maybe try and flatten it slightly.
The divide on the fun box could do with being a bit wider, so you can actually skate ontop of it.
Also, add some rails around the top of the quarter pipe and a lip, so it looks more complete.

planks? wth and the fun box is not too steep.

[ItsDave]

Nice again, now the challenge which everyone fails at is the skaters.

[Everlong]

Hmm the skaters are hard to do they always look too stiff.

[PaintYourTarget]

planks? wth and the fun box is not too steep.
As in pieces of wood, to make it look constructed and textured.
But from your response, you obviously can't take CC.

[Everlong]

To be honest i couldn't care less what you think, from now on any C&C that is made by someone who doesn't know what they are talking about i shall ignore.

[ExtraKen]

Can't edit sorry:

heres the grey (concrete) version. not a fan of concrete skateparks my self but it looks good lol.

http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/8229/doublepiecegreyby0.png

thats so good :D sorry for late reaction lol :D

love it!!! :D maybe make some skaters?

[Everlong]

thats so good :D sorry for late reaction lol :D

love it!!! :D maybe make some skaters?

lol thanks didn't take too long to recolour, and making the skaters is too hard might have another go xD it always comes out realy noobish.

[CrazyCali]

I like it. 10/10

[PaintYourTarget]

To be honest i couldn't care less what you think, from now on any C&C that is made by someone who doesn't know what they are talking about i shall ignore.
I assume you are trying to claim I'm a noob, so to speak, just because I didn't brown nose to an acceptable level.
Believe me, I do know what I'm talking about and you just made yourself look like an arragant, stuck up anus monkey.

But ok, humour me. Tell me what was wrong about my CC and point out how I do not know what I'm talking about.
Perhaps, also explain why you were so rude to me in the first place.

[Kyle.tk]

To be honest i couldn't care less what you think, from now on any C&C that is made by someone who doesn't know what they are talking about i shall ignore.

Well lee does know what he's talking about i'll have you know. And so do I, so if you won't listen to him, maybe you'll listen to me.
The light source is crazy. Unless the sun is focused only on the centre of that half pipe or w/e it is, then it really shouldn't be shaded like that. The light source should come shining down from the top, bottom, left or right.

And dude, if you can't take c&c don't bother posting stuff?

[Verrou]

Pretty neat! 8/10
Maybe add tagging? Because what is a good SkatePark without it's tagging :)

[mr.parasols]

Add shadow, It'll give it more depth.

[Jõnathan]

I added a fun box it doesn't realy go with the Rollin/QP because the shading doesn't need to be as detailed to get the affect of a slope.
the only reason the shading is so detailed on the QP is because it is curved and the light hits it diferently, so the funbox only needs one shade as the sun is hitting a flat pannel.
C&C the usual plz improvements too.

http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/6971/doublepiecevo6.png

Lol it looks too much like caramel XD
But what President said was right - you should vary your textures and make it look like that the QPs and roll-in were made from various types and colours of wood.
And the slope on the funbox is too steep, which makes the divide look small in comparison.
And "What the Jesus?!" - the light is messed. It would only really do that in an indoor skatepark.

[Everlong]

I mainly skate indoor parks as the weather where i live is terrible its very rare that we would go to a concrete park.

[=Jen=]

Whoever said that the funbox is too steep...
Is a total and complete
NUMBSKULL.
Kthx.
And I love this alt, I like the wood one better... Just because I skate better on those ones. ^^:rolleyes:
♥

[Porosity]

o: what an awesome alteration! Nice alteration :D

10/10

[risque]

The shape is good, but the shading isn't. The funnel(?) is pillow shaded, basically - and the rest of the alteration has simple shading. It looks ridiculous. I know you said something about sunlight, but sunlight also makes shadows. (As others have said) Put more thought into it.

[Black_Apalachi]

Ok pwnage on the grey one. :o

+rep <3

[Bennyboy26]

nice furni:eusa_clap

[Everlong]

nice furni:eusa_clap

Its posted in other habbo alterations...its not furni.

[Chip.Monk]

Its good, i prefer the original to the grey one. Like somebody previoisly said, the 2 challanges are tagging, and skaters. I think skaters is probably too hard though.

[ltwistedburn]

put some gaffitti all over it lol and skaters and a grind pole

but i like now as well but look better with things i said lol

9/10

[Biseinen]

The part where you've for the extra (Longer) drop, that should be blended in with the bottom section, it just looks odd.

9/10.

[Vibes]

love it 9/10

+rep if i can