First design :/

[Joe!]

This is my first design. Please tell me what you think i should do to improve it.

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[Tekn]

it's ok...

impractical but ok.

green is offputting and tone down on the outer glow, make it white not yellow.

+rep.

[Joe!]

Thanks ill try that, although i cant edit the banner i deleted the psd by acident :(

[ebay]

quite basic but nice

[[N]]

Too simple but first time is good, well done.

[Joe!]

thankyou :)

[jarhead!]

Thats a nice Layout.

Well done.

[SimplyTech]

Good for a first layout but a tad kinda tacky
OMGZZZ +reppage

[Josh-H]

Good for first but... Tacky and tooo... green?