My 1st Alteration

[Decode]

Idn What Its Ment 2 B
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And Another One I Made Just Now

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[Browney]

The First One:
- The "doorway" type thing doesn't look very rounded. Look at other artists arches for some refrence.
- The doorway could use some shading so it doesn't look as flat. And some lighter lines and some darker lines and even a shadow to make it stand out.
- On the guy with the black hoody's right arm there is a pixel error where you can see the skin colour.
- Same as above on the other person.
- The rollers have pixel errors galore. Most are on the back of the roller and on the farside to us, on the red section. Maybe just link all the rollers to make one massive roller.

The Second One:
- The paint has the right shading. Not to dark and not to light. I like the drip aswell.
- The paint roller has too many black lines. Use brighter or darker lines if you want to add texture.
- The paint roller's handle seems too much to the left of the paint roller.
- The painter's hand is missing fingers. To see how it should be, get a drink on Habbo and make your Habbo face in the position that the painter is in, screen shot that and look at how the Habbo is holding the can.
- The box, shading wise, is perfect. Although yet again, a little bit to many black lines.

A good start, my favourite is the paint one.

6/10

[Black_Apalachi]

The First One:
- The "doorway" type thing doesn't look very rounded. Look at other artists arches for some refrence.
- The doorway could use some shading so it doesn't look as flat. And some lighter lines and some darker lines and even a shadow to make it stand out.
- On the guy with the black hoody's right arm there is a pixel error where you can see the skin colour.
- Same as above on the other person.
- The rollers have pixel errors galore. Most are on the back of the roller and on the farside to us, on the red section. Maybe just link all the rollers to make one massive roller.

The Second One:
- The paint has the right shading. Not to dark and not to light. I like the drip aswell.
- The paint roller has too many black lines. Use brighter or darker lines if you want to add texture.
- The paint roller's handle seems too much to the left of the paint roller.
- The painter's hand is missing fingers. To see how it should be, get a drink on Habbo and make your Habbo face in the position that the painter is in, screen shot that and look at how the Habbo is holding the can.
- The box, shading wise, is perfect. Although yet again, a little bit to many black lines.

A good start, my favourite is the paint one.

6/10


That pretty much somes it up. The doorway also shouldn't be pitch black. It needs a floor and a wall (take a look at the doorway of a Habbo guestroom). ;)