New wood furni

[RedFlagWaving]

hey started this a while ago and just found it and decided to finish it...
don't know what to call this range...suggestions?
http://i10.tinypic.com/4873u6f.png
rate /10 and C&C plz ^_^
EDIT: oh crap saved as BMP just a sec...FIXED ;)

[Everlong]

The bit where its sort of white to look like shine is wierd it doesn't look right.

instead of using loads of black lines use a dark shade of brown for the ones in the middle of the alteration if you know what i mean.

[RedFlagWaving]

ya i get what what u mean ;) ill try it now i hope i dont get flamed for "not having enough black lines"
anyways what can i add to the shine?

[Minix]

It's a complete misconception that Habbo uses loads of black lines - they use enough, but not all over the place. People who flame for that are dead wrong.

Off topic, I love your cookie sig. :S

[RedFlagWaving]

lol thx :D i drawed it a while ago

[Minix]

It's totally awesome...

On topic, Habbo mainly uses paler lines to highlight wood furni instead of outlining it - I realise you've dones that in places, but I think you could do it a bit more :P

[RedFlagWaving]

ya i just finished now i used a certain method:
if the corner is sticking out, use paler lines
if the corner is sticking in, use darker lines
http://i11.tinypic.com/48p4izm.png
the long bar is supposed to open so u can hide things in it ;O
its like a storage bin

[Turnip]

I like it alot.
9/10 +rep.
cant see much wrong with it ;)

[Tiuhdur]

i like it dude maybe to fix the shine make it slightly darker or more browny shade of light

[RedFlagWaving]

k ill fix the suggestions in a sec working on another alt
EDIT: tryed fxing the shine, dunno if it looks better
http://i10.tinypic.com/4d3krnp.png

[Black_Apalachi]

Second version (with less black lines) looks cool. :)

Only thing is, the right hand side of the long chest looks a bit weird. I am talking about the bend where there are two parallel lines. The space between the two lines increases on the bend and then decreases again when it goes down.

Other thing is, what is the tall one supposed to be/do?

Anyway, the wood effect is very nice. 8/10 + Rep. <3

Edit: N2S

[RedFlagWaving]

the tall one is supposed to be the corner
and about eh bend thing, i saw that too but i think it might be a bit late to fix it :'(

[Djcafc.]

nice well dont 6 /10

[Tiuhdur]

maybe make the shine on the bar more longer so its not looking like hinges

[RedFlagWaving]

the dark things in the back?

[Xero]

Not bad at all.. I haven't done anything wooden in a long time, but one of the first good pieces of art I did was wooden.. brings back memories hahaha. Anyway, the main problem I have with this is that the wood grain seems to be very even and boring, whereas in real life it's more 'all over the place'. Here's an example of what I mean.. (Ignore everything besides the grain, I know it has many problems, I made it in 2004) -

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/9480/woodtable2004fo1.gif

[RedFlagWaving]

i love that wood effect! i might try it later on