PDA

View Full Version : [Alteration] My 1st ever proper alt



stacie-xx
28-12-2006, 11:13 PM
ok i've done a few re-colours and I was bored so i thought I'd make this basically it's a habbo karaoke machine please rate out of 10 & tell me what you think about it and how I can improve it.

The weird circle things at the top are speakers before anyone asks because they probably will lol. I know it's not amazing but its my 1st one so yeah..


http://i141.photobucket.com/albums/r44/stacie-xx/karaokemachinecropped.jpg

Anarchy
28-12-2006, 11:14 PM
7/10 i guess its ok ,

MaGz
29-12-2006, 12:42 AM
Learn about angles/angeling. You claim its one of your first proper alts, so you did pretty well for that part. 7/10

hit-by-a-car
29-12-2006, 12:44 AM
To big, 6/10 ok for a first, doesnt look nice with those colours either. Ok tho,

christophe
29-12-2006, 03:42 PM
ok this is what i have to say first off for habbo the shading dosent look like that its more like different shades lined up against the sides to to create the illusion of a light source, secondly the microphone is not using the correct lines that habbo uses which gives the look of it not being isometric, thirdly the speakers at the top you should add some detail into them maybe some cross hatching to make it look like it has maybe a sortof like a actual speaker sortof look but overall i think if you were to fix those things up i would give you possibly a 8/10

Viruz
29-12-2006, 04:00 PM
Learn about angles/angeling. You claim its one of your first proper alts, so you did pretty well for that part. 7/10


Angeling ????????

Black_Parade
29-12-2006, 07:40 PM
Isometric in other words x)

Looks Wonderful, but its not very habboish

8/10

Bryan84
30-12-2006, 02:55 AM
Nice first try there :) but like Black_Parade said, yeah not very Habboish furni,

ColyTom
30-12-2006, 09:47 PM
I love it, it isn't very Habbo-y but I love it none the less. It has a pop art feel to it. 8/10 + Rep

RICHe
30-12-2006, 10:04 PM
thats actually quite good for an 1st proper alt! WELL DONE!

I will give 7/10 for this, as there is some errors (eg the mic). But it still looks good.

I espcially like the choosen colour :]]


+ rep for good try :]

Lexi-Love10
05-01-2007, 01:49 AM
It's not much of 3D and the coloring is unrealistic compared to Habbo so
6/10

Want to hide these adverts? Register an account for free!