Isaac
05-04-2005, 09:41 PM
Hello all, before you read my story, lets go over a few simple things.
1. Yes, It is a complete rip-off of star wars, but since I am a big star wars fan I have always wanted to make a story similar.
2. If you like it, great, if you dont please keep your comments to yourself , not everyone is a fan of this kind of stuff and I understand that, but calling it "Stupid" or "Gay" is unnessecary.
3. My story goes in order just like Star wars does 4,5, and 6 then 1,2, and 3.
Ok habbo's , hope you like...
---------------------Habbo Wars Episode 4 Chapter 1----------------------
A Jedi is born
It is year 4564, and Imperial Storm Troopers have taken control of Yunk 12, a galatic space station. Grinko Sauf, the commandor of the station, has ordered a group of Jedi's to fight them off. The two jedi's , Matt Rew and Kink-Saw have no mercy for the Storm Trooper's and will definetly take no prisoners.
"Do you have your light-saber?" ask's Kink as they both walk down the hallway "You cant fight without it." "What? Oh yea, right here sir" replied Matt
not caring about the light-saber. Kink looked at Matt with a stern face "Good, after what the trooper's have done with our lives it's time to take revenge."
The hallway finally ended with a dead end and two door's on the side. The puzzled jedi's do not know where to go, confused , the jedi's take the left side. "I hope this is it" said Matt."It has to be, the right side looked as if it led to a cafeteria." replied Kink. After walking several yard's the Jedi's finally come across a pack of Imperial Trooper's. Without further adew , Matt and Kink charge at them with full force but walk into a trap, the Jedi's had been caught.
Struggling to get out of the mess, the Jedi's are ripped from their light-saber's
and other gadget's.After three hour's of hanging, Darth Juan walk's in with his light-saber ignited."Ahh yes, Kink-Saw we meet again" said Darth "After 34 year's right? Ever since you killed my wife ive been counting down the day's till I would see you again. But I didnt expect to see you here. I heard the word Jedi so I decided I would finish them off, and I get to finish off you!"
Finally the men were released from the rope, quickly grabbed their light-saber and started to fight. Darth Juan and the Jedi's fought for exaclty 4 hrs. and 45 minutes."Youll never see light again Kink, after Im done with you!" said Darth, and as he said it he had struck Kink with the light-saber straight in the Head. "No!" Matt screamed with a terrified look. "Finally Kink, I got revenge on you! Muwhahahaha!" Darth yelled with a smile of sweet revenge on his face. Darth Juan ran out of the station but Matt quickly followed. Imperial Trooper's blocked the doorway so Matt could not go through. Matt quickly pulled out his light-saber and killed them, but after it was too late.
------------------------Habbo Wars Episode 1 Chapter 2-------------------
Return to Adooks
The Jedi known as Matt Rew jumped in his ship and returned to his beloved home planet of Adook - the home of the Jedi Base. "He died" Matt said "There's no way I could of stopped it." "Hmm..Well we will all miss Kink, good jedi he was." Said Emote - Head Jedi. The men left the room to go get some drink's from the local bar. As they entered the room, a dark shady figure could be seen sitting on a stool next to the bar. Matt, thinking it was Darth Juan, charged towards the man with his lightsaber ignited and slashed right through him.
The whole room was in shock - including Emote."Out! Out I say!" yelled the bartender angrily. The two jedi's left the bar. "I cant believe it, it looked exactly like Darth Juan, I mean it had to be him!" exclaimed Matt. "You can not take your anger out so quickly, even if Darth Juan WAS in front of you" Said Emote. "What? You mean if Darth Juan was in front of me right now you would expect me to stand here waiting?" Matt said with anger. "No, I would expect you to act like a jedi." Emote said in a calm tone. Matt sighed as they both continued down back to the Jedi Base. For matt would still not know the question's he wanted answered.
Habbo Wars Episode 4 Chapter 3
Invasion of Adook
As the two jedi's returned to their base, a sad call awaited for Emote. "Sir, you have a holo-phone call waiting for you in the library" Said a Rebel Trooper "Would you like me to tell them to call back later?". "No, Ill take it." Said Emote and then walked into the library and picked up the phone "Hello?". There was no response. He asked again and finally heard a voice coming from the other line. "Emote.." said a hoarse voice "It's me, Lee, your wife."
"Lee, I thought -" yelled Emote but was interrupted by Lee. "They made you think that, they threw me in water - not lava." Emote for the first time in his life was in loss of words. 5 Year's before he became a Jedi, as an apprentice, he lost his wife because of Darklord Phoenix - a Sith leader. They pretended she was hanging above molten hot lava. Emote was scared then and fought till' he couldnt anymore. He finally gave in, and his wife fell. "Why didnt you come up? Why didnt you give me some sort of sign?" Emote asked nervously. "They put me in haze water, I couldnt come up." replied Lee. "Haze water?" asked Emote still confused about the whole ordeal. Lee sighed and then answered "It's a water that put's you asleep when you are put into it, it's from Nespis." "Well, Im just so glad to hear from you,it's been ten year's. Did they just release you now?" asked Emote. "No, I escaped after you killed Darklord Phoenix by a transportation hole they forgot to cover up." Lee replied "After that I was picked up by some nice lady treasure-hunter's. We've been treasure hunting all this time. Im rather wealthy now you know." "Well that's good, I finally became a Jedi, and now Im head Jedi of the base" said Emote. Lee laughed and then sighed "There's something I got to tell you Emote, before I let you go." Lee took a big breath "Well, The two lady treasure hunter's I have been with for 9 year's are si-" Her speech was interrupted by a loud bang and then the phone went off. "Lee? Lee!?" yelled Emote. There was no response, all that could be heard was beeping noises from the phone. Emote ran to look outside. Outside where what looked like million's of Storm Trooper's lined up with blaster's equipped, some with two. The planet was under attack.
"Quick!" Emote yelled "Get our Jedi's and get outside immediately!" A rebel trooper passing by heard Emote and quickly told Matt and other Jedi's. They all ran outside with their lightsaber ignited and a shocked look on their face.
Behind them was Emote who also had his light-saber in his hand. The trooper's and the Jedi's charged at each-other. Rebel Trooper's also came and fought alongside the men. Men and Woman were running and screaming, children & babies were crying, the battle was complete havoc. The number of Jedi's and Trooper's killed went into the hundred's and innocent people were also killed. Matt and Emote, dodging there way through the laser's and the people quickly hopped aboard the ship for they knew Darth Juan was aboard. They fought through the remaining Trooper's that were still on the ship and made their way to the main room. "Where is he?" Matt said "He must be here!". Emote didnt reply, for he knew that they had been wrong about their suspicions. The ship was about to take off. Emote and Matt quickly found a hiding place as the ship went off into deep space, the Jedi's had begun their Journey.
1. Yes, It is a complete rip-off of star wars, but since I am a big star wars fan I have always wanted to make a story similar.
2. If you like it, great, if you dont please keep your comments to yourself , not everyone is a fan of this kind of stuff and I understand that, but calling it "Stupid" or "Gay" is unnessecary.
3. My story goes in order just like Star wars does 4,5, and 6 then 1,2, and 3.
Ok habbo's , hope you like...
---------------------Habbo Wars Episode 4 Chapter 1----------------------
A Jedi is born
It is year 4564, and Imperial Storm Troopers have taken control of Yunk 12, a galatic space station. Grinko Sauf, the commandor of the station, has ordered a group of Jedi's to fight them off. The two jedi's , Matt Rew and Kink-Saw have no mercy for the Storm Trooper's and will definetly take no prisoners.
"Do you have your light-saber?" ask's Kink as they both walk down the hallway "You cant fight without it." "What? Oh yea, right here sir" replied Matt
not caring about the light-saber. Kink looked at Matt with a stern face "Good, after what the trooper's have done with our lives it's time to take revenge."
The hallway finally ended with a dead end and two door's on the side. The puzzled jedi's do not know where to go, confused , the jedi's take the left side. "I hope this is it" said Matt."It has to be, the right side looked as if it led to a cafeteria." replied Kink. After walking several yard's the Jedi's finally come across a pack of Imperial Trooper's. Without further adew , Matt and Kink charge at them with full force but walk into a trap, the Jedi's had been caught.
Struggling to get out of the mess, the Jedi's are ripped from their light-saber's
and other gadget's.After three hour's of hanging, Darth Juan walk's in with his light-saber ignited."Ahh yes, Kink-Saw we meet again" said Darth "After 34 year's right? Ever since you killed my wife ive been counting down the day's till I would see you again. But I didnt expect to see you here. I heard the word Jedi so I decided I would finish them off, and I get to finish off you!"
Finally the men were released from the rope, quickly grabbed their light-saber and started to fight. Darth Juan and the Jedi's fought for exaclty 4 hrs. and 45 minutes."Youll never see light again Kink, after Im done with you!" said Darth, and as he said it he had struck Kink with the light-saber straight in the Head. "No!" Matt screamed with a terrified look. "Finally Kink, I got revenge on you! Muwhahahaha!" Darth yelled with a smile of sweet revenge on his face. Darth Juan ran out of the station but Matt quickly followed. Imperial Trooper's blocked the doorway so Matt could not go through. Matt quickly pulled out his light-saber and killed them, but after it was too late.
------------------------Habbo Wars Episode 1 Chapter 2-------------------
Return to Adooks
The Jedi known as Matt Rew jumped in his ship and returned to his beloved home planet of Adook - the home of the Jedi Base. "He died" Matt said "There's no way I could of stopped it." "Hmm..Well we will all miss Kink, good jedi he was." Said Emote - Head Jedi. The men left the room to go get some drink's from the local bar. As they entered the room, a dark shady figure could be seen sitting on a stool next to the bar. Matt, thinking it was Darth Juan, charged towards the man with his lightsaber ignited and slashed right through him.
The whole room was in shock - including Emote."Out! Out I say!" yelled the bartender angrily. The two jedi's left the bar. "I cant believe it, it looked exactly like Darth Juan, I mean it had to be him!" exclaimed Matt. "You can not take your anger out so quickly, even if Darth Juan WAS in front of you" Said Emote. "What? You mean if Darth Juan was in front of me right now you would expect me to stand here waiting?" Matt said with anger. "No, I would expect you to act like a jedi." Emote said in a calm tone. Matt sighed as they both continued down back to the Jedi Base. For matt would still not know the question's he wanted answered.
Habbo Wars Episode 4 Chapter 3
Invasion of Adook
As the two jedi's returned to their base, a sad call awaited for Emote. "Sir, you have a holo-phone call waiting for you in the library" Said a Rebel Trooper "Would you like me to tell them to call back later?". "No, Ill take it." Said Emote and then walked into the library and picked up the phone "Hello?". There was no response. He asked again and finally heard a voice coming from the other line. "Emote.." said a hoarse voice "It's me, Lee, your wife."
"Lee, I thought -" yelled Emote but was interrupted by Lee. "They made you think that, they threw me in water - not lava." Emote for the first time in his life was in loss of words. 5 Year's before he became a Jedi, as an apprentice, he lost his wife because of Darklord Phoenix - a Sith leader. They pretended she was hanging above molten hot lava. Emote was scared then and fought till' he couldnt anymore. He finally gave in, and his wife fell. "Why didnt you come up? Why didnt you give me some sort of sign?" Emote asked nervously. "They put me in haze water, I couldnt come up." replied Lee. "Haze water?" asked Emote still confused about the whole ordeal. Lee sighed and then answered "It's a water that put's you asleep when you are put into it, it's from Nespis." "Well, Im just so glad to hear from you,it's been ten year's. Did they just release you now?" asked Emote. "No, I escaped after you killed Darklord Phoenix by a transportation hole they forgot to cover up." Lee replied "After that I was picked up by some nice lady treasure-hunter's. We've been treasure hunting all this time. Im rather wealthy now you know." "Well that's good, I finally became a Jedi, and now Im head Jedi of the base" said Emote. Lee laughed and then sighed "There's something I got to tell you Emote, before I let you go." Lee took a big breath "Well, The two lady treasure hunter's I have been with for 9 year's are si-" Her speech was interrupted by a loud bang and then the phone went off. "Lee? Lee!?" yelled Emote. There was no response, all that could be heard was beeping noises from the phone. Emote ran to look outside. Outside where what looked like million's of Storm Trooper's lined up with blaster's equipped, some with two. The planet was under attack.
"Quick!" Emote yelled "Get our Jedi's and get outside immediately!" A rebel trooper passing by heard Emote and quickly told Matt and other Jedi's. They all ran outside with their lightsaber ignited and a shocked look on their face.
Behind them was Emote who also had his light-saber in his hand. The trooper's and the Jedi's charged at each-other. Rebel Trooper's also came and fought alongside the men. Men and Woman were running and screaming, children & babies were crying, the battle was complete havoc. The number of Jedi's and Trooper's killed went into the hundred's and innocent people were also killed. Matt and Emote, dodging there way through the laser's and the people quickly hopped aboard the ship for they knew Darth Juan was aboard. They fought through the remaining Trooper's that were still on the ship and made their way to the main room. "Where is he?" Matt said "He must be here!". Emote didnt reply, for he knew that they had been wrong about their suspicions. The ship was about to take off. Emote and Matt quickly found a hiding place as the ship went off into deep space, the Jedi's had begun their Journey.