A song about my old best friends bullying me

[ignitionhost]

Somthign i made up, when i used to be bullyed,

Rob my best friend,
Drives me round the bend
He's so very mean
and he's way to keen

Alex my best mate
uses me as bait
He has warts
He always gets me caught

They all hate me but what have i dun?
They think best mates are just for fun
But when i come round.. everythings sound
BUT I'M NOT TAKIN IT ANYMORE........OH !

Punches and kicks all aimed for me,
when i get up you'll pay the fee
One good day,
I'll strike back
I'll come to you and give you a smack
I'll attack you, like a swarm of bees
Then you'll be down upon your knees
When you look-into my eyes,
You remember all those lies

They all hate me but what have i dun?
They think best mates are just for fun
But when i come round.. everythings sound
BUT I'M NOT TAKIN IT ANYMORE........OH !

What do you think?

[scottish]

Thats Cool but Sorry to Hear You Got Bullied :'(

[ignitionhost]

Thats Cool but Sorry to Hear You Got Bullied :'(
Lol it's okay,
the story came true ;)

[Blacky04]

Thats really good.... Im a guitar player my-self and ive tried writing lyrics many times. I can only ever write good lyrics when im under some serious emotional pressure. I have total respect for you. Well done :) . I give it a big fat 9/10 :). Did you fight back to the bullys in the end?

[ignitionhost]

Aye, totaly, even though they both ganaged up on me :(

[Blacky04]

:o im sorry to hear that. as long as they got what they deserved. :). How long ago did all this happen?

[ignitionhost]

I dunno, last year?

[Bradd-Aaron]

That happens to me my two mates allways MENTALY bullie me by saying stuff :'(

[scottish]

Sorry to hear Brad :'(

[ignitionhost]

Aww,..
Well beat bullying - make a stand were a band !

[Bradd-Aaron]

Funnily enough they have beat bully bands well there getting one! I have one tho :0

[lilli666]

thats a good poem uve got talent poems are a really good way 2 express ur anger and hatrid its sad 2 hear tht u got bullied though

[ignitionhost]

thats a good poem uve got talent poems are a really good way 2 express ur anger and hatrid its sad 2 hear tht u got bullied though
it's more a song,
I made a tune up aswell, and then made a drum beat to match it, connected it to sibelious, and wrote in the lyrics..
It sounds class.
Might use it for my band ;)
EDIT: I've added a new verse, i might ask a habboxtv person to make it into an animation :rolleyes: . What do you think? New bit's in blue ;)
Rob my best friend,
Drives me round the bend
He's so very mean
and he's way to keen

Alex my best mate
uses me as bait
He has warts
He always gets me caught

They all hate me but what have i dun?
They think best mates are just for fun
But when i come round.. everythings sound
BUT I'M NOT TAKIN IT ANYMORE........OH !

Punches and kicks all aimed for me,
when i get up you'll pay the fee
One good day,
I'll strike back
I'll come to you and give you a smack
I'll attack you, like a swarm of bees
Then you'll be down upon your knees
When you look-into my eyes,
You remember all those lies

They all hate me but what have i dun?
They think best mates are just for fun
But when i come round.. everythings sound
BUT I'M NOT TAKIN IT ANYMORE........OH !

When i look back
At what happened to me
I realised that
I was being bullyed
As i sit in this chair today
What happened to me wont pass away
I'll remember it, for all my life
When i've grown up, with a wife
But it'll still be happening
this very same day,
bullies think it's only a play
that's why we have to make a stand
stand up strong and wear a band

They all hate me but what have i dun?
They think best mates are just for fun
But when i come round.. everythings sound
BUT I'M NOT TAKIN IT ANYMORE........OH !

Rare /10 c&c.
Rep if it's worth it