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iPixo
13-01-2007, 01:16 PM
My 2st alteration : Mini Skate park!
Rate 1/10 :::eusa_wall

http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/4488/2staltal3.png
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Mado
13-01-2007, 01:23 PM
Skaters look wierd, especially [sp?] the guy in the red top at the top right.
Also the part on the right is a vertical drop and then a slant.

6/10

iPixo
13-01-2007, 01:31 PM
But its 2st :(

X:RiX:X
13-01-2007, 01:33 PM
Don't be so hard on him andrew, i think it's quite good, however the shading needs work and the habbos need to look more like their skating than standing. The drop on the smaller ramp need to slowly rise not just go straight up. Make a background like grass or pavement then it will be quite good for 2nd, well done. 7/10

Seatherny
13-01-2007, 01:44 PM
Thats ace!

iPixo
13-01-2007, 01:53 PM
ty rix, I have learned things of you :)

Thanks for it

PigsNose
13-01-2007, 02:21 PM
Ugh..
Is this your 1st or 2nd alt, 'cause you mixed it up.
(lol at 2st)
Anyway the people aren't isometric to the ramps.
Good try anyway.

X:RiX:X
13-01-2007, 02:24 PM
Happy to help =D

Browney
13-01-2007, 02:28 PM
You start shading the curve before the ramp curves. If you look at the shading then look at the black outlines they don't match.

Mado
13-01-2007, 03:11 PM
Don't be so hard on him andrew...

Only stating my point. I still have a right to do that don't I??

X:RiX:X
13-01-2007, 03:27 PM
true, andrew sorry.

Mado
13-01-2007, 03:28 PM
Hehe i always win.

On Topic: I agree with all the comments about shading etc. also i love those roller skates

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