First ever slightly bad alt

[alex 1889]

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/2887/habboeditfin4sw.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

there it is

rate out of 10 pls and dont be to harsh as i do suck at art

[Mado]

lol made me laugh.

Needs to be isometric and shaded [the boxes]
The fire is very good

8/10
Great first try :)

[Describe]

2/10 For the alt
6/10 Over all for the idea.

1. Look for a while and posture to it - You'll see its squint.
2. The fire doesnt look habboish - It looks like a 20 Second paint Job.
3. The shading - You hardly have any.
4. The lazer is also squint
5. The hole in the wall looks like a circle l[ It is ? ]l


Also the guns arent to great mate.
But i bet when mit done his first ever alt
It was something like this - Good for a first.

[Wolk.]

slightly bad?

1. Learn to do things isometric.
2. Shade.
3. Save as PNG.

[PigsNose]

[QUOTE=Mado;2930062]lol made me laugh.
The fire is very good[QUOTE]
The fire is from the dragons, just a copy and paste.
Anyway remember to save as .PNG
Make things isometric
Put in shading
Make things more in detail
Overall:
3/10
sorry.

[alex 1889]

slightly bad?

1. Learn to do things isometric.
2. Shade.
3. Save as PNG.

wow thanks 4 that positive comment