first habbo alt with shading

[Tiuhdur]

ok i didnt really know how to shade but i gave it a shot. its one of my first pieces of ms paint pixel art. im gona make more c+c and rate /10 please but dont be to harsh as ive only just started lol

http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/4295/habbohouse18lc.png (http://imageshack.us)

[RSTurbo]

8/10 it looks like its floating and the shading has some errors sort them out?

[Tiuhdur]

could you tell me how to sort them out please and its meant to be floating lol

[lolligeboy]

Maybe Im just stupid, but I zoomed in and there where NO errors!
-rep

Nice house, but the roof could be a bit larger than the house possibly. Also I think the shades are to far away of the house.. And why is it floating?

[Tiuhdur]

do u mean the shadow? and its floating because its like a stage where ill make alts lol

[Browney]

do u mean the shadow? and its floating because its like a stage where ill make alts lol

No. He means the shadow is'nt touching the house so it looks like the house is flying off the ground.

[Tiuhdur]

oh i see could you show me where the shadow must be?

i think ive fixed it:

http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/3066/habbohouse19bw.png (http://imageshack.us)

[lolligeboy]

No I dont think thats the right way.. Ill create an example for you..
EDIT:
Ok finished
http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/1475/example7xn.png

[Tiuhdur]

ok please do =)

[lolligeboy]

I did :p :)

[Tiuhdur]

ok cool ill edit mine

here it is:

http://img184.imageshack.us/img184/3074/habbohouse14sq.png (http://imageshack.us)

[lolligeboy]

Thats alot bether! But its a bit far away from the house.. it looks like the sun is allmost down, but then the shades should be longer.. so put them closer to the house :)

[Tiuhdur]

ok here it is:

http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/8510/habbohouse13yb.png (http://imageshack.us)

[lolligeboy]

Thats perfection!!! I mean the shades :p, the house could use a make over too :p

[Tiuhdur]

ok lol