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alex 1889
22-01-2007, 07:26 PM
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/4007/habboedit8vj.th.png (http://img267.imageshack.us/my.php?image=habboedit8vj.png)

There it is, the finished version of my first ever alt, i probably wont bother doing much more to it even thought it isnt that good.

Please rate out of 10 and say what i could improve

Disaronno
22-01-2007, 07:29 PM
I dont think its great but its ok 6/10

Improve your shading and speach and lines :)

Tiuhdur
22-01-2007, 07:31 PM
i hate it sorry it is so out of place there is sort of no link between anything and boxes arnt isometric

4/10

alex 1889
22-01-2007, 07:40 PM
ive been wondering what can i do 2 improve shading?

Amir
24-01-2007, 05:48 PM
Really sorry but strongly dislike.

I'll try and fiddle with it to make it look good, but that looks like well... worse than a beginner's attempt (!)

EDIT: Can't fix, sorry. Very poorly made. Have to remake floor, walls etc. as you've mucked them up ~ Try templates.

lolligeboy
24-01-2007, 07:07 PM
You should learn some isometric pixel art...
Check a guide in my signature.. and USE IT!

Smits
24-01-2007, 07:16 PM
Sorry but i really dislike ( its better than hate) this, 3/10. Try something less complicated before doing a room again.

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