First Official Unfinished Ice Rink Alt (Not finished yet)

[:Liam]

what do you guys think. Would also like some points on how to improve

http://www.hab-towers.com/images/Secret_Part_1.PNG

[Smits]

Its pretty good although theres some pixel errors in the ring bit, some of the lines around the squares are pretty dark compared to the rest.
However good effort, are you going to add more?

[mk]

its alright
the bar looks abit out of place
but its still good
8/10

[:Liam]

Yes im definately gonna work on it more I couldnt get all the bars the same height lol.

[CECER1]

The stairs don't match up with the floor.
Look easy to fix.

With Error: 7/10
No Error: 9/10

EDIT: Just out of intrest? Did you use that blank alt of a public room?
If you fix it and i see it +Rep For You

[Amir]

Nice idea :)

I might try something simular...

[Rich.Boy]

Not too keen, Doesnt look "Habboey" enough.

[johannest85]

The stairs is really strange... it looks impossible if you follow the highest step, the discoball is flying in the corner, the lockers are misplaced, the bar doesnt fit in, i miss shadows on things and exchange the black lines that you have over the wholeplace...

But the idea is good

[:Liam]

Update:
what i did:
lined up the bar better (still a few errors on it though :P)
tried to fix the stairs
got rid of random bold lines on the ice and fixed error under goal.
Also the disco ball isnt flying in the corner its on rope i might make it into a chain so its more obvious, im also gonna remake the lockers soon lol.
http://www.hab-towers.com/images/Secret_Part_2.PNG

[Black_Apalachi]

There are quite a few errors such as the top step, the barrier on the bottom-right corner of the rink, the lockers and a few others.

I'm not to keen on all the black lines on the tiles. I think you should use shades of colours instead - especially on the ice.

Also needs shaddows everywhere and that includes making one wall darker.

The disco ball looks out of place to me because of the way it is directly in line with the corner of the room. I don't think ceiling decorations suit Habbo anyway. :rolleyes:

Good effort anyway, hope to see more soon. :)

[Amir]

Errors:

The ice-rink has extra green lines around outside,
Disco-ball could move slightly left (it works better.. I attempted)
Extra line on top step side.
Could use lines through rink corners matching the green but slightly more.. turqoisey...

[Kowther]

Very nice.
9/10

[Describe]

The Bar is wrong
The Peoples Hands seem to Be Errors.
Why is their a table onto the ice rink
There should be a Border All the way round?10 - 4 = 6 = 6/10 - Good , Well done.

[:Liam]

Its not a table its as goal i havent had time to put another goal in yet