[First Official Alt] Habbo Garage

[Amir]

(Credit to Lol for the tutorial linked in his/her signature ~ works well)

I created this from a tutorial I found, although I kept roof all the way through as I couyldn't be bothered to change it xD

Works well I hope? Please be kind, it's my first official alt. First one which wen't OK.

http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/7509/firstproperalthabbogara1iy.png
EDIT: I think lower right corner is a bit dodgey.. sorry.

[Nemo]

its the best first alt i've ever seen!!!! +rep first lol and ermmm try adding more detail and the lines on the garage should be lighter, but ermmm also show me in conparison(sp?) to a actual habbo coz im lazy and then i shall rate wen it rocks my socks ;D so yeah... +rep

[ItsDave]

Heres some help. Some of it confuses me, the way you've styled it.
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/2507/help2iq.png (http://imageshack.us)

[lolligeboy]

DO NOT use thick lines
DO NOT use weird glass things on the glass
DO continue working on alts, and become bether and bether and bether :p

BTW, the tutorial in my guide had some inportant other things you did not use, the light lines...:
http://pixelfreak.com/img/19.gif
That.. zoom in and you will see...


However very nice for your first, I do not see any errors exept the one Xzoid showed you... Tnx for using my guide :p

[@xP]

its gd for a first alt

[nobility]

It looks good, apart from the pointed out errors, and I think the shadow would have looked better facing the opposite way. Nice try.

[Amir]

Updated edition...

http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/655/firstproperalthabbogara8kf.png

I took in the comments you all made (I hope) It does look better now.. please keep commenting! First time i've done something right...

I could not sort out the corner which was mentioned as a pixelerror. I am aware of it.. I always was, I just can't fix it.
+Rep to first person who can fix it for me! Thanks!

[Joker]

Its a great alt, but as you said its your first official (i think youve probably done more) :D 7/10

[Amir]

Is that a compliment or an insult?

Please note..

I used lolligeboy's tutorials. Click this link to see them :

http://habboxforum.com/showthread.php?p=2864351#post2864351

(Plus rep for Lol if I can.. good tutorials and advice)

EDIT: Got to spread, sorry.

[Amir]

Ah.. urrr...

Well, it's for v9 sized habbos. As I did not consider the average Habbo height...

(Apologies for the HC badge, got the Habbo image off GoogleImages)

http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/940/firstproperalthabbogara1oq.png

[lolligeboy]

What corner should be fixed?? The one on the bottom??

I do not see the error, but I edited yours a bit.. I also added my XD mark, so you can see its mine :p
Why does the roof has 2 lines actually? and you highlighted the one that does not bend, so there it was not needed..
http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/1678/edit8sc.png

[Amir]

Oh my god!

Fantastic! Would +Rep you buy can't (need to spread). Thanks!

I'm going to make something new now.. please do more constructive commenting on here and my new alt! CHEERS!

[shank]

the lines were too thick, but you fixed that.

6/10.


my first alt was a person.

[e5.]

Niceeeeeeeeeee lines are quite thick though [:

Thanks, EJW

[Seagy]

Well done man its great!

[Advanced]

umm somthing about that not sure.. i think its the shadows i like it as its a first alt weldone +rep

[Amir]

I like posted this ages ago, I think someone bumped. xD Atleast i'm not bumping my own thread.

Yeah, the shadow was done pretty rough because I didn't understand how to make shadows.