my reritten poem this ones excellent plz read and u see why

[Bloodkanekiller]

A inciddent happened
when poor billy crashend
got hit by a car
because the car wasnt that far
he comitted suicide
because he was bullied
dont hurt people feelings
or they will get back at you
and turn around and smack you
dont judge people for who they are
because people can go really far
now the bully named sam
felt sorry and gave him flowers
but billy older brother got sam
he hurt sam by the inch of his life
so sam died he got stabbed by a knife
what this is dont bully people they could kill thereselfs so be kind
and the brother of billy
went to prison
hung him self in prison
would you like that to happen
so dont bully
wear a band

[G-flow]

poor billy crashened????

[infatuation]

crashened...... hmmm

[la-ur-en]

Yeah its good 9/10!

[Bloodkanekiller]

plz rate out of 10

[G-flow]

if you please tell me what crashened means

[Bloodkanekiller]

o its his 2nd name

[Painiac]

Sorry, wouldn't rate it highly. 3/10. Spelling is poor and parts of it don't make sense to me. Good theme though.