[Tom] Skate Park (v2)

[Decode]

Hears my 2nd version, its my 6th alt :)
Thanks to ppl who told me how to improve it, http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/2038/skaterdl7.png (1st one)
Rate /10 plz and give cc :)http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/8162/skaterpk5.png

[Ed.]

Wow thats nice pixeling! +REP+

[DannyyTBH.]

Tis 7/10 need 3 more things

1:- A grind poll
2:- Why is the dude hovering in the white huddy?
3:- People with **** as most people smoke in skate parks

[shank]

The graffiti needs more shading.

Its best to put graffiti and stuff on photoshop, you can
just get a graffiti font, and rotate it to fit the wall, then add gradients
or colour it yourself or w/e.

8/10, good for your sixth alt.

[Decode]

The graffiti needs more shading.

Its best to put graffiti and stuff on photoshop, you can
just get a graffiti font, and rotate it to fit the wall, then add gradients
or colour it yourself or w/e.

8/10, good for your sixth alt.
Ive not got photo shop :(
i use mspaint

[Black_Parade]

Nice ;D , But the shading on the half pipes is a bit blocky, try blending it?

7/10.

[PaintYourTarget]

Eurgh.
The boards are wonky, have no consistant shape and generally look bad.
The poles don't look round or curved.
The cracks should go horizonatally long the roof, then down, not just diagonally.
If you want a rating, then 3/10.

[Joker]

Looking at your skateboards and the position of the people and if i hadnt have seen your first version i would have said the park was ripped but its not very good but 5/10 for overall for the ramps and the like 7/10 maybe add a grinding pole maybe some inliners and scallys

[House]

Everything looks like a pile of hot steaming crap. The ramps are brown, and the shading looks like tiling.the skateboards look like burnt logs. The one guy on the skateboard has a really small arm. No, ALL of them have small messed up arms, with noticeable pixel errors. The graffiti, looks nothing like graffiti, and all the skateboards and people, are horribly messed up. With the exception of the guys in the corner, because you didnt DO anything to them. So I say 2/10 for your 6th try. Im harsh, deal with it. Why 2? Because you actually finished the alt.

[Tents:]

Tis 7/10 need 3 more things

1:- A grind poll
2:- Why is the dude hovering in the white huddy?
3:- People with **** as most people smoke in skate parks
+

4. The skateboards are a little...strange also, a little out of proportion.
7/10 from me though, generally very good work and on a big scale.:P

[mr.parasols]

Wheres your light source from? And if your going to add shadows do every object not just one. and possibly make the walls and floor more interesting.

[Advanced]

im not the worlds best pixel artist but i can pick errors on your work.

also i think shading, shadows need to come somewhere in there on the ramps etc just 1 color with a black line. on the wall add somthing looks plain. nice idea tho :D