[Template] 2nd one [FIREWORKS]

[Unpredictible.]

Hey i made this in like a short time, what you think of it my second time.

http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/6299/newtemplatezr8.png (http://imageshack.us)

Thanks.

[redtom]

Too flat.

[myke]

Too flat.

I agree, and it's also none of the colors fit, gradients are a a bad idea and also the font's not too nice either.

[F32]

That hurt my eyes.

[Unpredictible.]

kk how can i inprove?

[F32]

Make sure everything is aligned.

Look at other hosting templates & try to re-create them.

[redtom]

Make sure everything is aligned.

Look at other hosting templates & try to re-create them.

Note the word re-create, dont copy.

[ZAG]

Looks plain and boring. Doesnt suit a hosting site. Try adding stock images of servers etc.

[Unpredictible.]

Yeah i added images but i didn't know how to transparent :(

[Unpredictible.]

Note the word re-create, dont copy.


Yeah im not like you.. redtom.. i found a template you made and i found one on a site as well..

:o

Edit, please could a mod merge thanks.

[ThisNameWillDo!]

Hmm I don't like it.

Sorry

[fantazia]

thats ******* ****

[Unpredictible.]

Touch -rep, you never said whats wrong with it, as you can see its my second layout!.

i didn't have no practise at all, never read no tutorials just done it from my mind, and you don't give give me no comments just swear your just properly following everyone elses comments becauses thats what flipping suc'ks up do.

[fantazia]

im not sucking up its just ****

[JamesRouale]

Just because it's your secound that doesn't mean that we will comment in a sympathetic manor.

ACCEPT IT - IT'S LIFE.


Touch -rep, you never said whats wrong with it, as you can see its my second layout!.

i didn't have no practise at all, never read no tutorials just done it from my mind, and you don't give give me no comments just swear your just properly following everyone elses comments becauses thats what flipping suc'ks up do.

[DiscoPat]

I like it tbh

[Unpredictible.]

im not sucking up its just ****

Omdz..
lmf'ao let me see your layouts :l
you could at least be mature enough to say whats wrong and not talking like a 5 year old..





Just because it's your secound that doesn't mean that we will comment in a sympathetic manor.

ACCEPT IT - IT'S LIFE.



Are you dumb or what?
Just because its my second i never said ' only say good things about it' did i ?

I just wanted some comments on if its good or not and how i can improve it and not just oh its ******