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Fingerboots
12-04-2005, 11:04 PM
Mm, second alt, I don't think it's the best but I had an idea and ended up completely changing it as I went along. If this is classed as "rude" then, um, I'll remove it? Shouldn't be. xD
Here she is!
Hmm, okay, that looks really weird now I've inserted it but ahhh well! xD *Shrugs*
EDIT: Taken off while fixing stuff.. =o

Kekea
12-04-2005, 11:51 PM
Uhm....

Well... Her head is VERY messed up.And she/he looks like a guy. The glasses need to be fixed also (She might look better without them).

And the bra... is weird. And ther needs to be a black line outlining the bra....

The shoes...? There should be a line under her shoe.

And the shading needs to be fixed. The way of shading is you go darker not lighter. Thats why it kinda looks weird.


Thank you. 4/10

Jase
12-04-2005, 11:52 PM
And the bra... is weird. And ther needs to be a black line outlining the bra....


its not a bra its a bow tie :s the head looks like its on stilts :s

Punky
13-04-2005, 08:48 AM
its not a bra its a bow tie :s the head looks like its on stilts :s

It's a bit low for a bowtie :s

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