CarolineQT2774
13-04-2005, 02:29 AM
Please tell me what you think about this story I made about Habbo Hotel's Wobble Squabblle on my spare time.
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It was an ordinary day at the 'Rumble, with the sun shining brightly as if it could never stop. The sun sprayed its rays down upon the Rooftop, and as always, there was a couple of Habbos disturbing the peace. Clunk! ZZzap! Kapow! Where was it coming from? Several Habbos jumped in the pool, watching a man towering over the defeated competitors on a bunch of inflatables.. CarolineQT2774 was at the pool that day. She did a dive into the waters of the Rooftop Rumble, and caught up with the defeated Habbo.
"I can't overcome him... He's just to good," he moaned, breathing hard.
"Hmm. What's his name?" CarolineQT2774 replied, still staring at the Wobble Squabble champion.
"His name is WobbleChamp. Nobody can overcome him. He's so talented at this game," the boy swam over to the pool deck to catch his breath.
"Is there anyone who dares to challenge me?" WobbleChamp bellowed over the crowd. Caroline knew what she had to do. She snagged a couple of tickets from the ticket machine and climbed on the inflatable. The champion sneered at the girl who was standing on the opposite inflatable, though Caroline remained a serious look. She could take him on. "You do realize that I've played several games, and never loss? And that when I knock you off, it's going to hurt. Bad," he stated, staring directly into her eyes. Caroline didn't reply. She was ready. She could do this. 1, 2, her heart skipped a beat, 3. Wobble! They only had 90 seconds. Caroline closed in on WobbleChamp. Swoosh! Caroline lost her balance, WobbleChamp had nudged her, hard. But quickly she made the right step and was relieved to see that she was still on board. The champion tried to get her again, but missed, and he too lost his balance, but almost immediatly afterwards he regained it again. WobbleChamp took a step inwards, he was moving towards her. Caroline waited for the correct moment to strike, and then. Clunk! WobbleChamp was knocked a few step backwards. CarolineQT2774 thought it was over, but he smiled an evil little smile of his, and regained his balance.
WobbleChamp came charging into her, and Caroline wasn't prepared. Swoosh! Whack! Caroline was on one foot, spinning to the left, this was it.. she was going to fall into the water. WobbleChamp predicted the same thing. But amazingly she came back, and before her last stance, she hopped on her other foot and then it happened. Kapow! WobbleChamp was knocked out so hard that he didn't know what hit him. He couldn't even react, and he fell into the water like a statue. There was a moment of silence, and then the crowd burst into cheers. Caroline, still standing on one foot, regained her balance and stood on the inflatable over the crowd. She couldn't believe it. She was never that good at Wobble Squabble. She didn't even believe that she had, in fact, defeated a Wobble Squabble Champion. Strange things happen in the world of Habbo Hotel. She hopped onto the shoulders of the people in the water and they carried her over to the pool ladder. There she met the boy who lost to WobbleChamp before. He smiled at her, and she smiled back.
It was quite a day at Rooftop Rumble. Not exactly an ordinary one as planned. But the sun was still shining over her. The that would always remain shining, no matter what came her way.
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It was an ordinary day at the 'Rumble, with the sun shining brightly as if it could never stop. The sun sprayed its rays down upon the Rooftop, and as always, there was a couple of Habbos disturbing the peace. Clunk! ZZzap! Kapow! Where was it coming from? Several Habbos jumped in the pool, watching a man towering over the defeated competitors on a bunch of inflatables.. CarolineQT2774 was at the pool that day. She did a dive into the waters of the Rooftop Rumble, and caught up with the defeated Habbo.
"I can't overcome him... He's just to good," he moaned, breathing hard.
"Hmm. What's his name?" CarolineQT2774 replied, still staring at the Wobble Squabble champion.
"His name is WobbleChamp. Nobody can overcome him. He's so talented at this game," the boy swam over to the pool deck to catch his breath.
"Is there anyone who dares to challenge me?" WobbleChamp bellowed over the crowd. Caroline knew what she had to do. She snagged a couple of tickets from the ticket machine and climbed on the inflatable. The champion sneered at the girl who was standing on the opposite inflatable, though Caroline remained a serious look. She could take him on. "You do realize that I've played several games, and never loss? And that when I knock you off, it's going to hurt. Bad," he stated, staring directly into her eyes. Caroline didn't reply. She was ready. She could do this. 1, 2, her heart skipped a beat, 3. Wobble! They only had 90 seconds. Caroline closed in on WobbleChamp. Swoosh! Caroline lost her balance, WobbleChamp had nudged her, hard. But quickly she made the right step and was relieved to see that she was still on board. The champion tried to get her again, but missed, and he too lost his balance, but almost immediatly afterwards he regained it again. WobbleChamp took a step inwards, he was moving towards her. Caroline waited for the correct moment to strike, and then. Clunk! WobbleChamp was knocked a few step backwards. CarolineQT2774 thought it was over, but he smiled an evil little smile of his, and regained his balance.
WobbleChamp came charging into her, and Caroline wasn't prepared. Swoosh! Whack! Caroline was on one foot, spinning to the left, this was it.. she was going to fall into the water. WobbleChamp predicted the same thing. But amazingly she came back, and before her last stance, she hopped on her other foot and then it happened. Kapow! WobbleChamp was knocked out so hard that he didn't know what hit him. He couldn't even react, and he fell into the water like a statue. There was a moment of silence, and then the crowd burst into cheers. Caroline, still standing on one foot, regained her balance and stood on the inflatable over the crowd. She couldn't believe it. She was never that good at Wobble Squabble. She didn't even believe that she had, in fact, defeated a Wobble Squabble Champion. Strange things happen in the world of Habbo Hotel. She hopped onto the shoulders of the people in the water and they carried her over to the pool ladder. There she met the boy who lost to WobbleChamp before. He smiled at her, and she smiled back.
It was quite a day at Rooftop Rumble. Not exactly an ordinary one as planned. But the sun was still shining over her. The that would always remain shining, no matter what came her way.