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Blinger1
07-02-2007, 11:24 AM
My name is Shane and I had a dream.
Woof woof said the dog barking at the log I went to go see him but the torch was too dim, I got a fright and almost went out like a light. I grab the dog
leash and the dog eats a peach, jumping from my back the leech goes to the peach and then the peach grabs a cheek and bites it and says eek. So you jump on a stump and slip while doing a flip and I fell and bumped my head, I turned to look and Timmy was dead!
I cried for a while and turned senile. What was I to do? A-choo A-choo “Bless you” said Timmy, Timmy is back! I went to walk but fell and stacked. We went down the drive and stood in a bee hive, mmm honey I though while looking at the frog I caught! Off to the creek looking nice and sleek. I can not rap – clap clap, My frog got away, what can I say?
Look at that stone, oh wait its just a bone! Walking on the dirt while cleaning my shirt, the dog scratches his fleas while taking a pee, whoops – he missed, my head is now pis_ _ _.It looked golden, vroom vroom goes the Holden, I love my cars, I’m as serious as sars. Getting up in the ambo start doing the mambo. Dancing like hell I should just fall down a well. Climbing up getting really puffed, doesn’t really rhyme but who gives a dime? I need that dime to find out the time, maybe I’m late to get my milk crate.






This isn't finished, I made it because we had to write about a dream we had and someone wrecked mine by starting to rhyme it so i just made it a rap/rhyme.

Dash
07-02-2007, 04:06 PM
Erm.. Don't give up the day job.

Jazza
07-02-2007, 07:05 PM
Oh dear, do you know what you were saying or did you just jab at your phone on predictive text?

Blinger1
07-02-2007, 08:23 PM
it isn't ment to make sense its a stupid dream we were ment to write it.. its not a song or anything else ;)

DiscoPat
07-02-2007, 10:24 PM
lol, when you kind of say it in a beat its nice :D +rep

velvet
07-02-2007, 10:33 PM
um, it made me laugh, you can have some rep for amusing me.

Hitman
07-03-2007, 08:37 PM
yeah it was funny. :D

french
08-03-2007, 08:43 PM
i don't think it's yours.

the story is in black, your's is in custom colour.

c+p pastes the colour it is on the site.

Hitman
09-03-2007, 09:04 PM
i don't think it's yours.

the story is in black, your's is in custom colour.

c+p pastes the colour it is on the site.

its pretty crap, why would he nick it?

Chili
09-03-2007, 10:59 PM
UM. That's OK i guess. ;)

@xP
10-03-2007, 09:21 AM
i think its not bad like someone said in a beat it sounds good. Most rappers don't know what they are going on about sometimes lol..


Nice + Rep :)

Antallica
11-03-2007, 06:03 PM
No soz, Pathetic dont like that stuff, if you like that ok..

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