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al123
14-04-2005, 06:24 PM
hi marksa out or 10 plz feel free for constructve critisim

(soz bout bad quality had to change it to jpg)

Mit
14-04-2005, 06:36 PM
the badge on the left is all over the place but i guess no other msitakes. im not to keen on it.

Smiddy
14-04-2005, 06:37 PM
Ok i'll be kind, 5/10
The Writing on the front is pretty Awful to say the least
try making it go in line with the hotel :)

al123
14-04-2005, 06:41 PM
it was a tough problem im trying some furni alts

cand!hex
14-04-2005, 07:31 PM
Ok, I am sorry. I'll go through the bad points :

• Saved in JPEG... Try to save in PNG (if you can)
• Writing should be more like erm.. to a side so it looks real on the building... Same with hobba badges
• Make the badges transparent so the background where you got it from don't show :]

Good points

• Not too many pixel errors

Keep on trying, you'll be good soon! 7/10 :)

al123
14-04-2005, 07:37 PM
thx a bunch ill try it :) im gettin there

lauralol
14-04-2005, 07:38 PM
Yeah, the badges and writing need to be isometric!

caz08
14-04-2005, 07:40 PM
To be fair 1/10 as it is not a good idea

al123
14-04-2005, 07:45 PM
1/10 :( ahh well it was like me 2nd alt ne way keep em coming in ne way

Smiddy
14-04-2005, 08:48 PM
1/10? Thats a bit harsh.. At least give Reasons on how he cud improove it?

Infrontation
14-04-2005, 09:12 PM
Not one for me.. The badges aren't good and isn't for me to be honest.. 4.5/10 Eek Soz

Deamo
15-04-2005, 04:11 PM
No offence bu its not v good 3/10

hellzlilangel
15-04-2005, 04:13 PM
8/10 i like the gold badge on the top just writin needs sortin out n bakground of badges

edit:- it is ur 2nd alt so im been reasonable

OxfordScholar
15-04-2005, 05:22 PM
2/10 - Nice idea but keep improving on the quality. The writing and badges need to be sideways so it looks right (I know this is hard but have a go :p )

al123
15-04-2005, 06:49 PM
ok thx guys im startin summin from scartch now so im gettin there

JT-Fan
15-04-2005, 06:51 PM
Um..Nah 7/10 Pixel Errore

micky.blue.eyes
15-04-2005, 07:16 PM
Sorry, I really don't like it, bad quallity and the things you chanded aren't isometric.
I only rate the stuff you changed/added
So that would be the badges and writings.
3/10 (I don't like to be harsh)

Just keep practising and you'll get there. :)

KickerFliper
15-04-2005, 08:12 PM
4/10

Hmph

[ Thats All ]

:-Mystical.Dave-
15-04-2005, 08:14 PM
5/10 since its ur 2nd alt :)

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