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Wig44.
14-02-2007, 09:56 PM
This is part of a whole range of laser furni. I am goingto make a full set of laser furni and this is the beggining. I'm not too sure, I reckon it is a laser corner but it could also be a kind of prison.

http://i98.photobucket.com/albums/l255/wig94/aafinishedlaser.png

Rate + CC please. Done in paint.

OMGitsaROSS
14-02-2007, 09:57 PM
Needs to be thicker and shaded ;)

Charlie
14-02-2007, 09:57 PM
You've posted this in recolours?

&&, it doesn't look that good, i don't understand what it is, and it has no shading?

Wig44.
14-02-2007, 09:59 PM
It is shaded, but not well enough, and I jus tnoticed I posted in recolourings... oops.

Here, shaded better: http://i98.photobucket.com/albums/l255/wig94/lasercornermodified.png

reindeer.
14-02-2007, 10:18 PM
Errm doesnt really look like a laser.

Wig44.
14-02-2007, 10:20 PM
They are laser beams.... like the laser gate. And no one has actually said any CC or /10s

Browney
14-02-2007, 10:56 PM
Not my sorta thing really.

Andeeh
14-02-2007, 11:04 PM
Needs Better Shading.
It Isnt My Cuppa Tea, But Good Try!

TrueColours
15-02-2007, 12:42 AM
Hmmm.. I'll wait 3/10. Maybe add more shading, spend a lil more time?

A4AOwen
15-02-2007, 12:44 AM
It's good but simple. Good attempt!

Stephen
15-02-2007, 01:40 AM
Mmm its good maybe it could be a really small boxing arena :D

Habbos box in it then if they fall against the laser then.. you know what happens :)

Earthquake
15-02-2007, 01:52 AM
Fairly quickly done? I expect you worked hard on it, but maybe zoom in and do some more shading, :) I'll give you a 6/10 for effort!

e5.
15-02-2007, 09:31 AM
good but it doesn't exactly look like lasers :P

Bomb-Head
15-02-2007, 10:43 AM
It's good, especially if it has been done in paint :D

Tiuhdur
15-02-2007, 11:56 AM
i think maybe use the sides of the laser gate and the lasers from laser gate to make it more laserlike :)

Black_Apalachi
15-02-2007, 05:07 PM
Try looking at an actual Laser Gate and compare. You need to add a lot more shading and reduce the background size. :)

Bren
15-02-2007, 05:32 PM
i cannot seem to understand the black bit at the bittom with grey line. if tht is shadow sorry but its not very obvious. im sorry dont really like tht much 3/10 :(

Munky
16-02-2007, 11:42 AM
It's a nice idea.. But to improve it, I think you should maybe shade it abit? :] x

Joweii
17-02-2007, 04:20 PM
This is part of a whole range of laser furni. I am goingto make a full set of laser furni and this is the beggining. I'm not too sure, I reckon it is a laser corner but it could also be a kind of prison.

http://i98.photobucket.com/albums/l255/wig94/aafinishedlaser.png

Rate + CC please. Done in paint.



Alright, Not brill 4/10

A.K.A
18-02-2007, 10:08 PM
Its okay. 6/10 :)

Azza
18-02-2007, 10:38 PM
its not habbo like.
it doesnt look like lasers.
no shading, correct me if im wrong.
it doesnt make much sense.
and im hoping this is ur first or one of ur first alts.

no rating =]

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