The Gothic Cola Machine. [NEW]

[jackass]

Normally I post my alts on other sites for critisism so I can improve on them before posting them here, but with this one I posted here straight away. Anyways I had to go to the dentist, so it wasn't as good as I planned, but hopefully you will find it a bit more gothicy than the gothic dj decks!

(COMPUTER WON'T SHOW SCRIPTED WINDOWS SO CLICK THE LINK PLEASE) :8
http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/3438/gothiccolasr1.png

[scubadiva]

It's ok, try to improve the logo and middle parts. The actual recolour ofthe cola is awesome

[jackass]

It's ok, try to improve the logo and middle parts. The actual recolour ofthe cola is awesome

Okay thanks for the advice. :)
I did the middle bits like that because thats the gothic middle bit on most furni, and with the logo I tryed to draw a bat but it messed up. :P

[letisix]

Nice ;] Just need some black xD

[jackass]

Thanks for whoever plus repped me! I will return it if you leave your name, i'm only 19 rep points away now. :)

[Laurensh1]

It is really cool!

[Meticulous]

'Tis brill. =D
I'm thinking it may need a bit of red?
Or am I imagining? ;D
9/10
Always room for improvment in everything <3

[Shawnstra]

It looks cool :)

[jackass]

It looks cool :)

Thanks, and thanks to everyone who has commented! :)

[Bryan84]

Nice work. So what drink this serves? Blood ? :D

[Groves]

I like it, perhaps try and make it 'darker'?

[:Hazel]

Nice work + rep.

[nobility]

To be honest I don't see anything gothic about it, an odd pattern slapped on a grayscale cola machine. Try varying what you do, just because something is black and white, it doesn't mean its gothic.

[Rubyetta]

I like it, looks a bit plain but good! 6/10

[Chip.Clip]

I like it =] 9/10 + rep too =]]]

[DPS]

It's good but wont it be better if it matched the gothic furni?

[Mado]

Nice work. So what drink this serves? Blood ? :D

i was thinking more of gruel because of the colour of the liquid inside :P

[Ed.]

very nice! 8.5/10

Its need to be the shade of the gothic furni

otherwise class!!

[HabbPixel]

Nice work, Well done.

^^ 9.5/10

[A4AOwen]

It's good :)

[The-Mate]

its cool but maybe a little flat better than i can do anyway lol

[Browney]

There's something I don't like. Not sure what.

[docker]

nice alt 8/10

[Bruxy]

Love it ! Absaloutly love it !:eusa_clap +Rep !

[GoldenMerc]

Not bad ;)

[Zuar]

looks good yet if you want to make it gothic dont just use grey use some reds and shade it?

7/10

[Cajak]

Nice ! Needs some black.

8,5/10

[User43]

not bad i like

8/10 cos i reckon u shuldve added a bit of blood red or something for effect

nice work neways +rep+

[Excel]

hahahaah sweeeeettt