A song I wrote. (still needs alot of work).

[Sly]

Jenny.




I think about you every night and day,
The thought of you just never goes away,
From 12AM to 12AM you’re just stuck in my head,
Stuck like paper and glue.

Your long purple hair,
Your amazing smile,
Your amazing laugh,
Your amazing taste in music just blows me away.

We talk almost everyday; the time just strays away,
Your little X’s after everything you say,
How can we be? Why can’t you just see, see what you’ve done to me,
You’ve changed my life, changed it in all possible ways (in all possible ways).

When we first met, the air was cold,
I was so bold; you were the only one,
Only one there, for me, for me to see, how much this is killing me,
If I had another chance, to do things right, they won’t only go wrong,
Yet, yet again.

Your long purple hair,
Your amazing smile,
Your amazing laugh,
Your amazing taste in music just blows me away.

The way you have that **** happens attitude,
The caring you have for everyone,
It’s what makes you and me just so meant to be,
So seriously,
Why can’t you just see, see what this is just doing to me,
It’s like 2+2=4, I’m your 2 and you’re my 2 and we’re the 4 (a simple math question) .

Your long purple hair,
Your amazing smile,
Your amazing laugh,
Your amazing taste in music just blows me away.

[chilloutrich]

not bad man, what music genre are you planning on having that to?

[Sly]

Post-Hardcore.

[Browney]

Sounding good. I'd like to hear it acoustic but that's just my prefrence. :)

Keep us posted.

[Vodata2]

sounds good, although u should make it habbo related

[@xP]

Sounds good habbo realted Rofl are you mental. it sounds good as a poem aswel

Well done + Rep

[Sly]

sounds good, although u should make it habbo related
I'd rather not.

[Isolde]

Nice i liked it. +rep

[-Sweex]

lol , habbo related would sound good but nah.

anyway gd song!

[Ashhizzle]

Quite Cool, Sung version soon?

[Browney]

I'd rather not.

LMAOO.

[Sly]

Quite Cool, Sung version soon?
Sorry, I don't sing ;[

[YoManGo!]

Pretty nice. You're a better writer than me, most my songs being about ponies and vegetables.

[Browney]

Sorry, I don't sing ;[

Shame really. I would like to hear someone attempt it.

[Misawa]

Not bad, but some of the lines seem overly elongated compared to the others so it kind of looks 'unsingable'.

[uh huh her]

i like it, i'm writing a few songs atm aha. hopefully they'll be as good as yours.

[OMGitsaROSS]

sounds good, although u should make it habbo related

Sadact :rolleyes:

OT: Nice song mate :)