habbo railway last wip now with background/track/bridge

[Tiuhdur]

here it is im really really happy with it. its turned out better than i thought it would. i only need to add something to the top middle ish to make it fully complete and then ill think about putting a train on. i tried to make the background as simple as possable. i did not make the trees i googled for those so i hope you enjoy it. rate of /10 and c&c please thanks :)

opt

http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/7738/habborailwayfinishedtrads1.png (http://imageshack.us)

[Decapitated!]

Yayy first comment!

Its lovely 10/10

[Meticulous]

'Tis brilliento my petit pally =D
One question.. Why is the grass and water stripey?
Shouldn't it have it's own texture like the grass next to the pool in the Lido. ;D

[Racoon]

Very very very good. Maybe you should try making some trees. ;] Lol. Nice shading, Now all you need to do is add a more detailed back ground and a train. 10/10 +rep ;]

[Tiuhdur]

ty for all comments im going to look at the lido to see what you mean. i just went for simplicity :P

[Meticulous]

Yeah I THINK it's different.
It's just.
I think it's just different shdes of green blobbed all over the place. and then around the edges it goes jaggedy to give the effect of it standing out like real grass ;D
And how about for your water you make it glisten? And actually make an animation of it, glistening ? ;D
That would be sexxy <3

[Tiuhdur]

i have no animation programms nor can i animate lol

[Demynx]

It is okay but not jaw-dropping, I give it a 3/5

[Tiuhdur]

cool thanks :)

[docker]

very nice 9/10

[Tiuhdur]

thanks

[Browney]

It's too square. Like the river bank. Surely where the water meats the land would waver. But keep working on it.

[Shawnstra]

I <3 it :)

[PaintYourTarget]

here it is im really really happy with it. its turned out better than i thought it would. i only need to add something to the top middle ish to make it fully complete and then ill think about putting a train on. i tried to make the background as simple as possable. i did not make the trees i googled for those so i hope you enjoy it. rate of /10 and c&c please thanks :)

opt

http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/7738/habborailwayfinishedtrads1.png (http://imageshack.us)
It is very square and lacks texture.
The blocks just seem to end at the ground, surely they should be built into the ground or have a base?
Also, the supports should go beneath the water, not stop at the surface.
The wooden sleepers need a highlight.
There are also many pixel errors and faults.

[Tiuhdur]

point out the pixel errors please

[Meticulous]

I can only see one pixel error,
The leaf on the top of the tree on the left it kinda, out side of the lines.
Other than thet I think it;s fab =D
How about putting some shadow under the trees?

[Browney]

It's very very blocky.

[Tiuhdur]

ill try and add shadow to trees and try and make the reflection in the water

[PaintYourTarget]

point out the pixel errors please
Two unwanted black pixels on the highlight of the metal rails.

[.Suzu.]

Really good.
can't see any imperfections.
That really does deserve some rep
+Rep

[sBosma]

Pretty good, 8.5/10

[Tiuhdur]

thanks

[Browney]

There was no need for a painfully obvious bump, mate. ;)

[Tiuhdur]

i didnt bump

[Browney]

i didnt bump

No offence but a reply just saying "thanks" seems pointless.