Water Patch

[User43]

I was looking at Edhawks' post and thought i'd have a go. Not my best alt, but please give advice (+rep for helpful advice)

rate and slate!

http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/3378/c00lhj3.png

Personally i think i havn't blended the colors well enough, and my lilie pad was a bit off. My bubbles are good in my opinion but the placing of them isnt that good i dont think.

This was a rushed alt as i did in 5 mins but thats cos ive got other stuff to do which is important (homework lol)

p.s this is same size as a petal.

[Meticulous]

Omgosh that's sexy.
But I think maybe you could make it a bit, 3D?
I know that doesnt make sense cause its water..
But if i did it, i would have made it so that there was imagionary walls around it. ;D
8/10

[User43]

ye maybes, wait ill add that in a sec, so its got depth

edited:

http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/3512/c00lmb8.png

[lew!]

lots of pixel errors.. i dont like it sorry.

[Homosexual]

around that lily pad - make it 1 PIXEL big.

[ReviewDude]

Hmm, I like the concept - but the final product isn't that good If one thing, it's too dark, and not very Habbo-like. I think you should scrap it and start again, maybe use the pool for inspiration?

[Browney]

I agree with Rd above me.

[User43]

i think the one i did 3D, was habbo like except the lilypad.

[Ed.]

What was my post about? Its kl 8/10

[siz]

i dont realy like it because its very flat and it looks like a floor poster, sorry

[RedFlagWaving]

Read later posts next time Siz, he posted a less flat version.

Anyways, it's not bad, maybe try and mak the colors dithered (and not just color after color)

8/10 +rep ^_^

[ReviewDude]

i dont realy like it because its very flat and it looks like a floor poster, sorry

Hmm... I think it might look good as a normal poster - to be honest...

[Shawnstra]

Make it 3 dimensional and it would be great.

[bad-dj]

well i like it nice its so cool.

[CustomHabbo]

It kinda looks like u extended one of the posters in habbo. I might be wrong because i havent been onn in a while

Anyway i sorta like it. 7/10. Maby make it look like theres pool lining around it

[User43]

guys remember to look at all the posts so you see the 3d one... means its not flat like a poster...

[CrazyCali]

Can't find the 3D one. where is it.

[:Hazel]

http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/3512/c00lmb8.png


Can't find the 3D one. where is it.

There ;)

[Jam]

What About: http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/3350/neatft9.png (http://imageshack.us) ?

[Black_Apalachi]

They're bubbles? I'm glad you said that because I didn't have a clue. I can tell it was rushed and it wouldn't work in a room because two of the corners have been cut off. This means there would be a tiny gap between each patch. :rolleyes:

Edit: Just saw the updated 3D version. Good job. :)

[GoldenMerc]

Hmm, I like the concept - but the final product isn't that good If one thing, it's too dark, and not very Habbo-like. I think you should scrap it and start again, maybe use the pool for inspiration?

I agree completely
Good try