My New Refreshment Theft - View and Review.

[Enunciation]

Just created my mocha/icm - refreshment theft. Please feel free to view and review. Constructive critisism welcome.

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/9409/refreshmenttheftej1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Jazza]

The room is very cluttered, use more similar Items in the maze part 5/10

Please save screenshots as .png

[MrCorny]

I like it, maybe remove some stuff but i give it a 8/10. :)

[Enunciation]

Made a few changes; opinions?

http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/5648/newrefreshmenttheftrq3.png (http://imageshack.us)

[Sly]

Made a few changes; opinions?

http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/5648/newrefreshmenttheftrq3.png (http://imageshack.us)

Looks abit better now.

[le harry]

Nice but for some reason it looks cramped ;)

[Shawnstra]

Use a basic type of furniture for the maze. I like the idea of the refreshments at the end, so much to choose from :)

[:Hazel]

not really a theme or colour scheme to it. it looks completely random if im honest...

[The Professor]

not really a theme or colour scheme to it. it looks completely random if im honest...

^^ ditto

[DCeption]

I like it, although think it will be hard to play behind the drags!

[MrCorny]

Hwo did you close stack your plasto?

[Enunciation]

Thank you everyone, comments and suggestions were much appreciated. I have looked at the room more objectively (sp) and agree with all comments. I plan on remaking and implementing changes. New room coming soon. :)


Hwo did you close stack your plasto?

With regards to your question MrCorny; I used the magic of BL!NKEY lol. http://www.stacking.co.nr/ - 'Seat Close' video tutorial.

[Bryan84]

pretty mess up =l

[Enunciation]

http://img357.imageshack.us/img357/1893/refreshmenttheftet3.png (http://imageshack.us)

[The Professor]

Side-by-side comparison: The last one slaughters the first one.

Points for improvement:
Swivel the dragons so theyre facing towards the game area
Have the marquees the same colour
rearrange the doormats so they are in some sort of order, theyre just making the room look messy atm
replace the maj with a t sofa or the t sofa with a maj, and raise them to the same level as the mats in that area

great improvement, 8/10

[deagle]

Its looking junkier and junkier

The first one is better. The main floor however had random furni. Just change those, not the right side or the bars.

[Enunciation]

Side-by-side comparison: The last one slaughters the first one.

Points for improvement:
Swivel the dragons so theyre facing towards the game area
Have the marquees the same colour
rearrange the doormats so they are in some sort of order, theyre just making the room look messy atm
replace the maj with a t sofa or the t sofa with a maj, and raise them to the same level as the mats in that area

great improvement, 8/10

dragon roatation - check - and I agree - it looks better

same colour marquees - was trying to go for a variety of colours in the room shame there are only 2 available marquees atm :(

doormats make the room look messy? :( they were diagonally making a pattern (white-black-white) I have an idea for them and will see how it looks.

there's not really space for 2 ts so I might invest in more maj's.

thank you very much for the suggestions, much appreciated.


Its looking junkier and junkier

The first one is better. The main floor however had random furni. Just change those, not the right side or the bars.

Hmm, not too sure I agree, however; thank you for your opinion and taking the time to post.

[Moozo]

Take away the flags ;]

[T.A.G.S1989]

A nice change from the average ole mocka thefts *Thumbs up* :)

[Ed.]

you need a theme and to stick to it

[Enunciation]

Take away the flags ;]

I like the flags; adds more colour the room... would look bare without them? what would you suggest instead?


you need a theme and to stick to it

theme is meant to be a rainbow/colourful thing etc, no REAL theme to it, just a bright, different than usual, refreshment thingy theft.

http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/9269/refreshmenttheftwe8.png (http://imageshack.us)

Made a couple more changes, I would get the whole set of birdbaths to continue the colour theme, but as luck would have it I can't afford them. Also made it playable as 1v1 or 2v1 with the movement of the rollers and flags. IMO it still doesn't completely look how I want it for some reason... any other suggestions/comments would be much appreciated.

[3d]

Nice but for some reason it looks cramped ;)
im thinking the same

i think because the overhead seating ontop of them blue things dunna name lmao