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Bloodkanekiller
24-04-2005, 07:30 PM
Today i will make the most funiest poem and bestest i have ever made i will try as hard as i can so read here for it

Im on the computer typeing away
think of another day
when theres school
i feel drool
but when its saturday
i say cool
when its monday i usally say
thats not cool
usally in the hall
cry after 3:35
after i heard my gunie pig died
not long to walk
getting bullied
getting hit
wacked around the face and being called a nit
preying to god for it to stop :eusa_pray
but in the end im in the plot
people call me stuff and say go away
im so badly crying
on my own
in a house i was dared to do
took away and never seen too
cut up dead for good
its my mates who did it
i thought ill have a good life
lots of children
really dead
but a body in the ground
with my mum crying
brother wineing
of the day i died
at the age of 21




Lol did you like it eney of u add rep plz

Edited by Butcher11 (Forum Moderator)- Moved from Anything not do with Habbo(x). Please post in correct forum.

la-ur-en
24-04-2005, 07:36 PM
:s i thought you said it was funny and the best :s

Bloodkanekiller
24-04-2005, 07:40 PM
dunno seemed good
when i said thts not cool
like it

Smiddy
24-04-2005, 07:42 PM
I Think you Should Really Stop Spamming the Forum With "Poems" They're not doing your Rep Much Good are they? :s

Bloodkanekiller
24-04-2005, 07:43 PM
Other people liked them

Painiac
25-04-2005, 09:05 PM
HAH! Name someone who liked them and I dare anyone to say they aren't getting slightly bored/fed up with you spamming with your "poems." You are getting on my nerves but I am holding my temper. You have potential but put your feelings into them rather than useless rubbish and for the however many-eth time..... THEY DON'T HAVE TO RHYME!!!

Michael.
25-04-2005, 09:08 PM
HAH! Name someone who liked them and I dare anyone to say they aren't getting slightly bored/fed up with you spamming with your "poems." You are getting on my nerves but I am holding my temper. You have potential but put your feelings into them rather than useless rubbish and for the however many-eth time..... THEY DON'T HAVE TO RHYME!!!
It's funny because my 4 year old cousin writes better poems than him!

Painiac
25-04-2005, 09:11 PM
LMAO! I'm sure your 4/yo cousin does! :D

Michael.
26-04-2005, 06:00 PM
I am a cat,
I sit on a mat.
It makes sense, more than Bloodkane's poems do...

Rate out of 10, Lmao! If she gets more than 6, I'll give her a sticker and say the internet loves her Lmao!

lauralol
26-04-2005, 06:09 PM
Other people liked them

Yeah you're right BloodKane I LOVE 'EM DO MORE PLEASE!!!

.:F:.
26-04-2005, 06:55 PM
Here's a better poem from Black Adder:

I cant remember what it's called, probably something like War or Boom.

... Boom Boom Boom.
Boom boom boom boom.
boom boom
Boom Boom Boom....

Rarelime
26-04-2005, 06:56 PM
Erm.. it's alrite i suppose, but some parts don't really make sence like you jump from part to part without creating a link between them, ie: 'not long to walk getting bullied' how does that link :s

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