Confused

[Oracle.]

It is sort of a song, but it will work as a poem as well.
I Hope.

Together, Forever i thought we would be,
I thought, yes i thought just you and me,
But when you broke my heart,
And sent me away,
I didn't know what to do, or what to say.

Confused, but not anymore,
I'm in control of myself,
I can just walk out that door,
You, yes you will soon see,
The other side, yes, the other side,
The other side of me...

Post your thoughts... Don't be too harsh!! :)

[Kyle.tk]

its good, would go well with some nice acoustic playing in the background.

In the second verse/stanza whatever, you changed the rhyming pattern to the one in the first. But thats no major deal;] Tis good;]