habbo lobby 3 wip, nearly done

[Tiuhdur]

hope you all like it, its nearly finished, dont know what i need. i tried adding some stuff like a rug but it kinda ruined it, i want to keep it as simple as i can rate and c&c please peeps thanks ive worked really hard on it


http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/9895/habbocinemawip8nq6.png (http://imageshack.us)

[DozenFuries]

Before you post the final one, i'd suggest more shading :)

But all in, it looks good. Look forward to the final masterpiece. ;)

[kk.]

its good but the blue is a bit bright to be honest. and in the doors you need it to be going a bit darker as it goes in :)

ill rate when i see the final version :)

and get that advertisement up lol

[X:RiX:X]

Change the blue to a marroon colour, it would look less bold and would go great with a gold or lighter blue trim or detail, also the shading on the bin shouldn't go all the way down the white, should stop around lightish blue. Add signs above to doors if they lead to a theatre, like screen 1, 2, 3, etc. I will make an ad asap. =D Your getting there

[AndyDude312]

I like it but I think maybe the shading on the cylinder thing goes too light.

[Tiuhdur]

thanks for the feedback guys, i am going to make the doorways a tad bigger but they are more like hallways :)

[jackass]

Get rid of the light shading on the bin & table. But apart from that, its excellent! 9/10. :8

[DJ.Standish]

I think that looks great, However you need abit more shading and abit less shading on the table and the bin (abit too light)

welldone anyway +REP

[Tiuhdur]

could anyone give an example of how to do shading im not that good :)

[sinistra]

I like it...
But..your alt got some logical mistake..the 'cylinder things' shading on the right is to light..and the shading on the right side of the wall is dark...
If the sun shines from the right side...the wall should be dark on the left side...not on the right...otherwise the cylinder is shaded wrong..

[Tiuhdur]

ok ill change that thanks dude

[whiteman12]

A bit more shading, and work on the lettering a bit more.

[Tiuhdur]

can you tell me where i need to do the shading and how plaese ty

[whiteman12]

I dunno, I'm rubbish at shading. Anyway, the blue sort of small walls need to be spiced up, they are a bit dull at the moment...

[Jazza]

The sign on the rug looks a bit like a swastica lol. Good anyway.

[Tiuhdur]

lol its not meant to be offensive (the rug) :P thanks for the c&c its coming along nicely