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crazykid37
18-04-2007, 04:23 PM
this is my office building i made for this site that i work at we may make this like our intro http://www.uploadz.co.uk/110vhbuilding.png (http://www.uploadz.co.uk)
plz cc and rate

also please do not rip

=gamemaster=
18-04-2007, 04:28 PM
I like it, finish the tunnel off :P
I think you may have got bored with connecting it to the road...

crazykid37
18-04-2007, 04:32 PM
lol yea i kinda got side tracked i think i may make my own background also instead of using the habbo uk one

Dan2nd
18-04-2007, 04:36 PM
very nice like the other dude said finish the tunnel off 8/10 + rep

crazykid37
18-04-2007, 04:55 PM
http://www.uploadz.co.uk/77vhbuilding.png (http://www.uploadz.co.uk) ther we go

Aces
18-04-2007, 05:39 PM
Very nice, 9/10

Pomegranate
18-04-2007, 05:54 PM
i think a shadow in the tunnel would look good, and shading in the water.
other than that it's nice.

Yoshimitsui
18-04-2007, 06:08 PM
Vey good i like that! Just the background that i think would go with a better colour! But overall 8/10

MrCorny
18-04-2007, 06:11 PM
Thats great, but.. Maybe some more work on the pond e.g. shading, other then that great ! 9/10 +rep

Earthquake
18-04-2007, 06:21 PM
http://www.uploadz.co.uk/77vhbuilding.png
The road needs some work, example the joints at the tunnel part, it looks overlapped, the tunnel goes too far into the background, Pond needs some more shading also add a cabbage, Honestly.. alot of shading is needed for this, But in all its fairly good, welldone, 8/10.

crazykid37
18-04-2007, 07:11 PM
http://www.uploadz.co.uk/621vhbuilding.png (http://www.uploadz.co.uk) here it is with shading i was thinking also if i didnt make the tunnel that far back wouldnt it look as if the tunnel was going no where? and for the pond i still got to figure how how iam going to shade that does any think i should make the inside of like our main floor also i think i was going to do it? anyone wanna see that?

DJ.Standish
18-04-2007, 07:24 PM
I like it :) Well done :)

10/10! +REPPP

crazykid37
18-04-2007, 07:25 PM
thank you

-Digifix
18-04-2007, 08:42 PM
make the door on the roof smaller

8/10 :)

-leestrong-
19-04-2007, 08:52 PM
Awesome! 9/10 +REP
Remove the black line from road/tunnel and add some traffic lights and a ped crossing? That would be new

Cajak
20-04-2007, 09:19 AM
There are some pixel errors on the building because of bricks.
Oh, here's another mistake:
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/4130/limitsua6.png

7/10, Nice job !

p.s Whoops, I did a grammar error on the picture.

crazykid37
20-04-2007, 07:34 PM
yea i kno i knew i should of stopped it there i think it was that far anyways in the original one

Shawnstra
21-04-2007, 11:45 PM
This looks really good. Need to finish the tunnel though and remove the line which separates the road from the tunnel entrance. 8/10 so far?

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