[BIO] The Paradise Sofa. [v4 - FINAL!]

[jackass]

Hey, I have taken in all of your constructive critisism over this project, and here is the final version. Hope you like! :8

http://www.iaza.com/work/converted/sunchair446675.gif

[SuperMatt]

I think half of this is copied off the V13 rare

4/10 for me.

[jackass]

I think half of this is copied off the V13 rare

4/10 for me.

No... only the tree actaully, and that has been highly edited. Thanks for the lowest rating yet though. <3

[SuperMatt]

Ok 6/10 :)

[jackass]

Ok 6/10 :)

Lawl. Thanks. :P

[DJ.Standish]

Hmm.. looks abit umm.. Like it will tip if you sat on it :P

I don;t know how you could fix that but.. meh x]

Verynice :) 7/10

[jackass]

Hmm.. looks abit umm.. Like it will tip if you sat on it :P

I don;t know how you could fix that but.. meh x]

Verynice :) 7/10

Thanks, but dude it won't tip. Its based on my own chair in my backgarden, it doesn't top because of weights or something?

[Reinout--D]

The chair is partly from a v13 rare too. I think.

And offcourse the pamltrees.

Acceptable.

[french]

I think half of this is copied off the V13 rare

4/10 for me.

It's the hollywood directors chair thingy, that and the palm tree, that's it.


Ontopic; I think it's great, but what I think it needs a bit of dithering
towards the bottom of the armrest where it goes down.

8.5/10 And good uck on your next project :).

[Jazza]

No... only the tree actaully, and that has been highly edited. Thanks for the lowest rating yet though. <3

The seat part is clearly from the hollywood chair

[tyrez]

I like it :) +Rep

[Shawnstra]

Good final version :P 10/10

[jackass]

Thanks all. :)

[jackass]

Couldn't edit. I may be making a Final-Final version, because by the look of this thread, obviously the others were better. So please post C/C. Thanks.

[Ashhizzle]

thats hot! can't think of anything to improve tbh

[Ed.]

That edited version of it is soo much better!

10/10!

+REP+

[Ekalb]

Couldn't edit. I may be making a Final-Final version, because by the look of this thread, obviously the others were better. So please post C/C. Thanks.

You need to make the chair more suitable. Perhaps try an interesting grain on the wood, some kind of pattern on the material so it looks like it might be from some organic material. You also need to add some kind of significance as to how the middle rope and the back rest join because a thick looking rope doesn't just magically join up with a completely different material with no signs of the actual join. Maybe try making it thicker.

[jackass]

You need to make the chair more suitable. Perhaps try an interesting grain on the wood, some kind of pattern on the material so it looks like it might be from some organic material. You also need to add some kind of significance as to how the middle rope and the back rest join because a thick looking rope doesn't just magically join up with a completely different material with no signs of the actual join. Maybe try making it thicker.

Okay thanks for your help, i'm making a final version 2, which will defiantly be the final one, no doubt about it. So please, just please tell me how to improve on it before its too late. :)
EDIT; Btw guys, i'm now working on another project, you could say its a damn lot bigger than this, well its something huge and not for guestrooms, but thats all i'm saying for now. Thread coming soon & I hope you all support me on it.