View Full Version : [Alteration] Fanta Machine
KevSays
28-04-2005, 03:11 PM
Well, I'm not really bothered about making alts.
I have made alts that I've put in Other Alterations.
But I have hardly ever put an alt in Furni Alterations..
I suppose you could say it's my first furni alt.
I got help from Stratocaster'/RedStratocas's tutorial.
I also got the idea from it as well :P
Please rate nicely.
:) And any C+C would be appreciated.
Thanks!
---MAD---
28-04-2005, 03:14 PM
not bad, looks great but it looks like a trapezium.
The fanta bit needs to be underlined straightly and the buttons need to be inline with the machines angle :)
Not too bad tho 6/10 for your first :)
5/10 nice try, nicer orange colour and logo next time?
---MAD---
28-04-2005, 03:18 PM
sorry i forgot to say, but there are a few pixel errors with the box bit where you get the can from :)
Try and make a nice logo :P or just use the real fanta 1 :P
Roboevil
28-04-2005, 03:18 PM
It's a phunky start, could do with alot of improvment though. Adding a fanta logo like whoever his name is said, and making the writing isometric, make the shape of the machine more exotic, rather than just that cuboid. Try getting ideas from like the mini-bars, mountain dew machine, cola machine, or other alts. 3/10 for now.
hedgeog325
28-04-2005, 03:20 PM
Its ok i guess..
5/10
GoldenGrahams
28-04-2005, 03:23 PM
It's ok.
Nice shading.
A few obvious p/e.
Logo not isometric.
Buttons not isometric.
Good for a first try, 6/10 for the effort. ;]
YellowParasol
30-04-2005, 12:23 PM
Yeah, the box where you get the can's from there is a little bit that is not coloured in, and where you wrote Fanta its a bit erm.. Wonkey...
the wombats
30-04-2005, 12:25 PM
i like it, just anit needs sorting out
Cheeseboy76
30-04-2005, 01:52 PM
buttons rnt isometric n dont look habboish 6/10
---MAD---
30-04-2005, 01:57 PM
hmm i dont think he has looked back at this :|, i want him to improve so he will enjoy alt making cause he could be amazing :D
dannyboymed
30-04-2005, 01:57 PM
The shape is okay, but the rest, URRRRGH. 4.9/10
Needs alot more work. 4/10
Bruck
30-04-2005, 02:09 PM
Make the letters and machine have a Vanahing point, that way it wont look so wierd :D
The buttons don't look right either. :p
---MAD---
30-04-2005, 02:13 PM
yeah buttons is a problem, not angled properly :P
He needs to practice abit more. :p
Cheeseboy76
01-05-2005, 11:29 AM
i fixed up ur fanta machine ere it is http://img17.echo.cx/my.php?image=fixedfanta4xh.png
KevSays
01-05-2005, 01:06 PM
Ty,
Yours is better.
boardslide
01-05-2005, 01:10 PM
It looks cool, but the words kind of messed it.
Good idea though
7.5/10
jstar953
01-05-2005, 02:29 PM
Good for your first Habbo alt. The buttons need to be inline with the machine and it could look more Habbo-y But still 7/10 for effort!
.Amberz.
10-05-2005, 06:25 AM
Its Not "Bad" because personally I think its fab. Could do with some shading though. :D 6/10
Rs Rob
10-05-2005, 06:45 AM
Deffinly dont look like a peice of habbo furni :p but ill say 5/10 for effort ;)
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