lick me
26-04-2007, 08:39 PM
idk where else to post this, so this'll have to do seeing as it's a song, and songs = music.
it's sort of in the style of a "the fall of troy" song, where there's no real chorus to the song, and it's short, mainly just a paragraph or so. here it is;
forgive me lord but i have sinned,
this life i cherish is not what it seems.
shrouded by these secrets and lies,
unholy like traits deemed wrong in your eyes.
but believe me when i say it feels so right,
HOW COULD IT BE SO WRONG?
"it's completely abnormal, so vile, sickening",
not to forget all the shame it'll bring.
but the fact it's condemned just makes it oh so more exciting.
TWO WRONGS SHOULDN'T MAKE A RIGHT.
this vision you hold, of what you've been told,
takes no reflection in the truth.
your mind is interfered with the poison you thrive of from your peers,
you're intellectual enough to grasp your own thoughts.
two of the same will just result in unforgivable pain,
but frankly,
i shall not tremble under this pressure you pound upon me,
because when i'm with her i'm stronger than you'll ever be.
yeeh, if you've heard some of "the fall of troys" stuff, you'd know that their instrumental addition to the song stretches it out, so you don't need alot of lyrics. anyway, comment, rate or what have you.
it's sort of in the style of a "the fall of troy" song, where there's no real chorus to the song, and it's short, mainly just a paragraph or so. here it is;
forgive me lord but i have sinned,
this life i cherish is not what it seems.
shrouded by these secrets and lies,
unholy like traits deemed wrong in your eyes.
but believe me when i say it feels so right,
HOW COULD IT BE SO WRONG?
"it's completely abnormal, so vile, sickening",
not to forget all the shame it'll bring.
but the fact it's condemned just makes it oh so more exciting.
TWO WRONGS SHOULDN'T MAKE A RIGHT.
this vision you hold, of what you've been told,
takes no reflection in the truth.
your mind is interfered with the poison you thrive of from your peers,
you're intellectual enough to grasp your own thoughts.
two of the same will just result in unforgivable pain,
but frankly,
i shall not tremble under this pressure you pound upon me,
because when i'm with her i'm stronger than you'll ever be.
yeeh, if you've heard some of "the fall of troys" stuff, you'd know that their instrumental addition to the song stretches it out, so you don't need alot of lyrics. anyway, comment, rate or what have you.