Ummm my 1st poem

[Randy-ortonrko]

The dad went to look for his cat
and found it up the tree
but all of a sudden it done a wee
he fell on the cat
but the cat landed on the mat
but the bad thing was
the dad was up the tree
lieing on the wee
so up there for 1 hour he stood
scared of heights he new
but he got and went phew
but then the cat got back up
breaked his back
lost his finger
dad got the cat once again
but the cat was fine
but the dad was crying

[Rarelime]

By any chance are you Bloodkanekiller ;), and the poem to me is a bit cheesy

[---MAD---]

yo move the poem to the poem forum so more people read it and a mod doesnt have to waste his time :)

[lauralol]

Yes that is bloodkanekiller, if you look at his Runescape post you'll see his Runescape name is BloodKane1 :l

Bloodkane you have obviously made a new name because you had the worst rep on the forum, but it's a bit of a giveaway who you are if you're gonna start posting the same ridiculous poems again!

[Dirgeofcerberus]

Lmao, I think he is Bloodkanekiller and the poem in my eyes is rubbish
You dont always need to rhyme every line to make a good poem

[cocaine]

The dad went to look for his cat
and found it up the tree
but all of a sudden it done a wee
he fell on the cat
but the cat landed on the mat
but the bad thing was
the dad was up the tree
lieing on the wee
so up there for 1 hour he stood
scared of heights he new
but he got and went phew
but then the cat got back up
breaked his back
lost his finger
dad got the cat once again
but the cat was fine
but the dad was crying

And, erm, why was the dad crying at the end.
2/10 poem. Rubbish to be honest.

[cocaine]

And anyway, its a bit obvious that its Bloodkanekiller because you started posting the same tripe as before.

[Randy-ortonrko]

yes bloodkanekiller is back
and im gonna post
49 poems a day

[Convictions]

NO WHY LORD WHY!!!!!!!!!!!! If only grammar/poem police existed *strokes chin*

*Goes in a huff* Note to self :- Never read any poems by bloodkanes alias

[?-Doc-?]

Omg. *Gasps* No "Its" Back.