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Krypsis
01-05-2005, 06:45 PM
Everyone wants to be a writer on habbox,
Because we all know it rocks,
From Interviews To Articles,
Habbox has no downfalls,
I wish I had a job here one day,
It would be so fun, who cares about no pay,
we all know habbox is the best,
so come on, another fansite put it to the test!



That was my little poem lol please tell me if it was good or bad

!star--girl!
02-05-2005, 09:51 PM
This looks alot like begging... :eusa_naug

-Soph-
03-05-2005, 07:15 PM
nice poem :-)

Krypsis
04-05-2005, 05:54 PM
im not begging, and thanks soph xD

Drewar
04-05-2005, 07:02 PM
Nice work plus it's a bit beggingful but who cares :) Great work dude :)

Krypsis
04-05-2005, 07:47 PM
Im not begging :( GRR

KickerFliper
05-05-2005, 04:05 PM
Beggingness Lmao

.Amberz.
05-05-2005, 07:01 PM
Good Poem, 9/10 But it is a Bit Begging its like "I would love a job there one day. I do not care about any pay" Its like in that peom the theme is "Can I have a Job?" :p Lol

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